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S-I-N, I, S-I-N

Summary

'My parents must hate me, why else would I be sent to this hell hole?'

Elyria Colfort or better known by her nickname Lainey has pushed her parents beyond the point of no return.
Raised in a restricting catholic household Lainey had never been given much of a chance to act like a teenager.

She gets good grades, doesn't date rebel biker boys or do copious amounts of drugs, does her chores, even cleans her room when asked.

But occasionally she does what she has to do to stay sane in a house where you get a slap upside the head for saying damn.

She drinks occasionally, goes to a party now and then, likes to sneak the occasional cigarette and goes to concerts with her friends.
It was a concert that was the final straw for her parents.

After sneaking out to see her favorite band with her friends she comes home to find her parents waiting, angry as ever and with a plan already sketched out of what her punishment will be.

So what do they do when their child is listening to the 'devils music' (if you could call The Red Jumpsuit Apparatus devil music)?

They send her to a all girls christian boarding school in England.

After arriving Lainey expects the school to be filled to the brim with snooty, up themselves private school girls...and she would be right about that but what happens when she meets her tour guide?

Enter Gerard Way, the unusually young school priest, also according to every girl at Rosehill Academy 'the hottest human being in existence.'

At first Lainey thinks he just happens to be a very gorgeous but cliche goody two shoes priest.
But she's wrong, there's more beyond a book than it's cover and the longer she spend at the school the more things she notices that are 'off' about him.

She may just be seeing things though, he could actually be a really nice guy, then again maybe not.

So what is he?
An angel?
Or a bad, bad man?

Characters

Elyria Colfort aka Lainey

16 years old and doesn't like people all that much with the exception of her few, very close American friends. She likes going to concerts or just seeing bands in general which doesn't sit well with her incredibly christian parents. Doesn't enjoy hearing the word no and has some very unusual methods for getting who or what she wants. __________________________________________________________________ "I swear the people here are going to kill me...or I'm going to kill them, either way is fine."

Father Gerard Way

24 years old. Enjoys talking to everyone at the school but keeps most of his personal life to himself. Is fully aware of how much attention he gets from the girls in the school and likes to tease them over it but is really not interested in anyone. __________________________________________________________________ "It's kinda adorable how they follow me around but at the end of the day they're all puppies frolicking around in a field, all the same with no differences, indistinguishable and completely boring. But that new girl though..."

Iris McCoy

Lainey's best friend and a common victim of the schools bullies. She's usually a quiet person who slowly comes out of her shell thanks to Lainey's friendship. Grows to enjoy more hardcore music and likes to help when there's a problem. __________________________________________________________ "I don't...understand why people treat each other like they do. How hard is it to treat everyone the same?"

Luka Coping

Miss Copings nephew and student of nearby boys school known as Ironbark Grammar. Wants to be an stage actor and is going to be playing the lead role of Peter Pan in Rosehill's school play. Quickly takes a liking to Lainey much to the displeasure of a certain individual. _____________________________________________________________ "I'd like to think I can be whoever I want without the public judging but that's just not the the way the world works."

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Great story!!

Jackie
11/14/17

@Electric_Revenge
You're welcome, keep up the good work! (also laughing at how long I discussed Gerard's dick size in the comment)

DreamsInOblivion
1/13/15

@PayingInNaivety
Hey and thanks, it's nice to get some feedback and genuine thought. I got chapter seventeen edited by someone else since I didn't have the time and they ended up making some changes that I didn't particularly agree with then after some thought changed it but only the copy on Wattpad so this is basically the whole story and its earliest and worst.

I'll be going over this story at some point with a scrubbing brush and cleaning it up so it's good to have comments like this to show me what I need to focus on.

cheers.

Electric_Revenge
1/10/15

That first sex scene makes my list for the hottest I've ever read (and you have no idea how much dramione (harry potter ship name) I've read. The reason I point out dramione is because there are SO many AMAZING writers within that subsection so if I compare you to them that is a good thing :) However, I think you got the measurements wrong on Gerard's dick size. 10 inches is beyond ridiculous, the female uterus is only 5-7 inches. I know you are from England though (Lainy said 'mum' instead of 'mom' and 'queue' instead of 'line' and 'jumper' instead of 'sweater' even though she's supposed to be American but those were the only idiosyncrasies I've caught other than that you did a really good job using American lingo the time she said 'mum' was the first time I even thought you may not be American) so that's understandable that you misjudged the conversion but 10 inches is about 25 centimeters (the average male penis is 5.6inches or 14.2cm). Having been someone who has lost their V-card there is no way in hell 10 inches would be at all pleasant... It is a mere two inches short of sticking a ruler (1 foot or 12 inches or 33cm) up my vagina (yeah ow). That just took me out of the REALLY nice sex scene a bit so perhaps maybe have him be around 7.5 inches? (19cm) That way he is a VERY well endowed, while still being realistic. Other than that I thoroughly enjoyed your story (I love the premiss of Gerard being a Priest, a nice change up to the usual Teacher Gerard), update the sequel soon please :)

DreamsInOblivion
1/10/15

That's rad! I'm going to the Melbourne one ^~^

Another_Reckless_Killjoy
10/23/14

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S-I-N, I, S-I-N

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Elyria Colfort aka Lainey

Father Gerard Way

Iris McCoy

Luka Coping

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