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ghost girl

Summary

mavis vangoth is a 16 year old girl what will happen when she dies and trys to make it through the after life but it hard to do this when the devil is stoping her from getting there

frank iero is a demon working for the devil, hes the devils second incommand and constantly makes it hard for humens to cross to the after life but what will happen when he falls in love with one of his victims

gerard way is the one and only Lucifer, his best friend frank is second in command and gerardc cant help but notice frank is falling hard for a mortel girl of god, unlike people say Lucifer can be under standing and not evil but thus is a very rare occerens but he will do what he can so frank and mavis can be happy but the only thing stoping him is his brother
mikey, but the other names people might know mikey but are jesus, god, Christ, and lord

mikey way is the younger brother of gerard way aka Lucifer but what happens when one of his brothers second in command is planning on making one of mikeys children a victim but what mikey finds out is that its really love but still mikey cant let mavis fall in the hands of the devil because eshe is simply a child of good

Characters

mavis

mavis

mavis is a 16 year old girl who died and i strying to find her way. but frank the devils secound in command is stoping her from getting any where

mavis

mavis

when mavis joins hell she becomes good and bad so she permanently has half black hair and half white hair

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Comments

thank you for pointing this out I type this all on my phone because at the moment my laptop is broken but I will go back and fix all of it so thank you for pointing this out and no you never came across as rude

@Artzzz

Vannagore Vannagore
7/18/14

Hi, I'm sorry to point this out before I even started reading your story. But, that's the whole point of my comment. I saw the summary for your story on the "Gerard Way" tag but the problem is that even in the summary, you have a billion typos and mistakes in grammar...
I hate grammar police assholes who correct people's comments or tweets, but fanfiction is basically literature, and in literature you have to take grammatical rules and spelling seriously. Your idea is great, and I would read it, but it's not "pretty" to look at, and that costs you readers.
I have no intention of coming off as rude or a little-miss-know-it-all, but please, for the love of whatever you believe in, either get a beta or proofread EVERYTHING you write twice before considering posting them.

Artzzz Artzzz
7/18/14