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ghost girl

i miss you so far

I woke up in someone's embrace they were crying and then I recognized the tattooed hand wrapped around my waist. "frank!" I cried and shot up looking at him "mavis I thought I was never gonna see you again!" frank cried. I toke his face in my hands and crashed our lips together I moved my hands so they they were tangled in his hair as he moved his hands up and down my waist. after a heated make out session we broke apart and smiled at each other
"you have no idea how long I have wanted to do that mavies" frank said softly smiling down on at me "Frankie" I said looking down shyly but my head was softly lifted up by frank "yes mavy waves" he said smiling "I-I-I love you" I said "I love you to" he said leaning down to softly kiss me again. "awww that's adorable" I heard Lynz say as we broke apart "well I see your back mavies" Gerard said coming up to give me a hug, "wait I have to do something" frank said loudly getting our attention "what is it frank?" lynZ said confused. frank walked over to me and kneeled down "mavis I have been watching you since you were 8 years old watching you learn and grow and I fell in love with you and when you were 13 and got your first boy friend and went on your first date I was the one who made his food extra spicie and he had to go home and after that when you dated james I thought hey I will never have her I guess I will let her go and be happy but the first time he hit you I thought he made a mistake he will only do it once but when he raped you I was the one who possessed that dog and went and ripped him apart as you ran away and I new I could never let anyone be with you because this world is not safe for an innocent girl like you but that day I left to go do something for myself because I had watched you for 7 years and I wanted a brake so I went and left and when I got back Gerard had told me that you were dead and I know this is bad but I was happy because I could finely be with you and I was sad to because you wont be able to live a normal life but I still tried and here I am I have you and I love you so much and I want to be with you forever so will you marry me?" frank said as I started to get tears in my eyes "yes" I said and jumped up and kissed him


*three days later*

every thing had been great since frank proposed to me I had moved into hell with him and Gerard and lynz me and lynz at the moment were trying to find a dress and my hair
had turned half black and half white and I really liked it but right now me and lynz were really focusing on the dress because I wanted to look great for frank.







Notes

hey guys Im thinking I want to make a book 2 after thins one but the end is not coming that soon

Comments

thank you for pointing this out I type this all on my phone because at the moment my laptop is broken but I will go back and fix all of it so thank you for pointing this out and no you never came across as rude

@Artzzz

Vannagore Vannagore
7/18/14

Hi, I'm sorry to point this out before I even started reading your story. But, that's the whole point of my comment. I saw the summary for your story on the "Gerard Way" tag but the problem is that even in the summary, you have a billion typos and mistakes in grammar...
I hate grammar police assholes who correct people's comments or tweets, but fanfiction is basically literature, and in literature you have to take grammatical rules and spelling seriously. Your idea is great, and I would read it, but it's not "pretty" to look at, and that costs you readers.
I have no intention of coming off as rude or a little-miss-know-it-all, but please, for the love of whatever you believe in, either get a beta or proofread EVERYTHING you write twice before considering posting them.

Artzzz Artzzz
7/18/14