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ghost girl

Fallout

"So umm Gerard what's it like to be umm the devil I guess" I asked nervously
"Fun I guess if you like terrorizing the shit out of people" he smiled down at me well I walked along side frank "oh wow" I replied a little shocked
that I was talking to the devil
"We'll what do u want to do Mavis" frank asked looking down and beaming at me.
"We'll is there any way to get me out of this blood stained and ripped tee-shirt?" I asked beaming back up at him. "Oh yeah gee can we get her some stuff from lynz" frank asked Gerard "oh yeah sure I think I will actually ask her to come up cause she's been watching you and her with me and she really likes her so I'm sure she would be pleased to meet her" Gerard replied smiling at me and frank. Wow the devils wife wants to meet me because she thinks I'm a cool person thats really cool, i mean I hope she likes me when she meets me in person.
*20 mins later*
Frank Gerard and I chated for a little about bands when we heard a a fire burning and then stop. I looked over to see a girl in a long black shredded dress with black hair and jet black lip stick. "Oh hello there you must be Mavis good god your even prettier in real life" she and smiled a big wide smile at me and I returned it because this lady was my type of person.
"Hi you must be lynz it's a pleasure to meet you" I replied smiling wildly at her as she also returned it. " oh yes I almost forgot here" she snapped her fingers and a cloud of smoke came around me and when it cleared I was in a long blood red dress and in a pair of lacy red shoes. "Oh my gosh thank you lynz" I ran up and hugged her "oh no problem they were an old pair that I really liked when I was a teen and I thought I should pass it on. " thank you so much I really enjoy being with you guys your like the fami-" I was cut off by an angry sounding Mikey " MAVIS WHAT ARE YOU DOING WITH THE UN HOLY ONES YOU ARE A CHILD OF GOD YOU HAVE WENT TO CHURCH EVERY SUNDAY SINCE YOU WERE BORN AND YOU WERE BAPTIZED IN THE NAME OF ME YOU MAY NOT EVER SEE
THEM AGAIN,YOU WANT TO JOIN THEM I HONESTLY THOUGHT BETTER OF YOU MAVIS!" I had tears in my eyes by the time he was finished " AND YOU BROTHER YOU AND YOUR MANIPULATING POWERS AND FOLLOWERS MANIPULATING YOUNG GIRLS INTO FALLING IN LOVE WITH YOUR FOLLOWERS SHES A CHILD OF GOD SHE BELONGS IN HEVEAN AFTER HOW SHE DIED SHE DESERVES ETERNAL HAPPINESS" he yelled at Gerard. I Was standing beside Lynz now She was holding my hand telling me it was ok and that it's my choice wether or not I go to hell or heaven. "Brother I was only giving her a family and I think it worked it's not like I'm torturing her she's like my daughter and she has bonded with lynz frank and I she is attached to us if we were to leave her she would be lonely" Gerard replied calmly.
" she is not your daughter she is my daughter she has not bonded its impossible to bond with those things that you are" Mikey replied angrily
"I'm taking her back with me and she will never be seen with any of you evil demons again" Mikey yelled mostly towards frank. I knew I felt something for frank and I got butterfly's every time he called me by those pet names and every time he smiled that sexy sly smile I got butterfly's in my tummy I can't live with out this man he made me laugh and smile and for some reason I always wanted to be around him he made me feel compleat and whole because the only hope for me is him... The only hope for me is you. Mikey started walking as I stood there beside lynz griping her hand tighter and she returning that grip even tighter
"Mavis it's time to go don't even bother to say good bye they never cared about you they just wanted to eat your soul that's all they want that's the only reason they are being kind to you because they are normally the most horrible people in the world when they have no people to impress so they can gain your trust and eat your soul and spit on your big gushing heart" Mikey said in a monotone voice looking at me blankly. I didn't relies I was crying until Mikey walked over and wiped my tears away "come my child" he smiled down at me and went to wipe one more tear away but I pushed his hand away and walked towards him "what you said is not true they can be kind and friendly and they-they-THEY CAN LOVE AND DO ANYTHING A NORMAL PERSON CAN DO THERE JUST DIFFERENT AND THEY ARE BEAUTIFUL BECAUSE OF THAT BECAUSE THEY SHOW PEOPLE ITS OK TO BE DIFFERENT NOT EVERYONE HAS TO FOLLOW YOU THEY CAN DO WHAT EVER THE HELL THEY WANT AND-AND WHAT THE FUCKING FUCK IM DEAD IM JUST SUPPOSED TO BE JUGED BY YOU AND THEN GET ETERNAL HAPPINESS IF THIS WHOLE FOREST THING WASNT REAL THEN IT WOULD BE OKAY BECAUSE I WOULDN'T HAVE FELL IN LOVE WITH A DEMON AND I WOULDN'T HAVE MEET A BADASS GIRL MARRIED TO THE DEVIL AND I WOULDN'T HAVE MEET THE DEVIL WHO IS ACUTELY NICE AND IS KIND OF LIKE A FATHER FIGUER TO ME I WILL NEVER GO TO HEAVAN WITH YOU BECAUSE I CANT LIVE WITH OUT THESE PEOPLE" I screamed tears streaming down my face as I collapsed in front of Mikey crying my eyes out.

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Comments

thank you for pointing this out I type this all on my phone because at the moment my laptop is broken but I will go back and fix all of it so thank you for pointing this out and no you never came across as rude

@Artzzz

Vannagore Vannagore
7/18/14

Hi, I'm sorry to point this out before I even started reading your story. But, that's the whole point of my comment. I saw the summary for your story on the "Gerard Way" tag but the problem is that even in the summary, you have a billion typos and mistakes in grammar...
I hate grammar police assholes who correct people's comments or tweets, but fanfiction is basically literature, and in literature you have to take grammatical rules and spelling seriously. Your idea is great, and I would read it, but it's not "pretty" to look at, and that costs you readers.
I have no intention of coming off as rude or a little-miss-know-it-all, but please, for the love of whatever you believe in, either get a beta or proofread EVERYTHING you write twice before considering posting them.

Artzzz Artzzz
7/18/14