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ghost girl

Dates r great

"Well Lynz is calling me back I got to go nice meeting you Mavis bye Frankie" Gerard said quickly disapireing in a big cloud of smoke.
"We'll frank what do we do now" I asked looking up at him smiling
"Aa yes I have something fun planed for us I just need to get it ready we'll you get ready so here is a present for you and I hope you like them and I will be back later to pick you up" he said smiling down at me lovingly. "Ok umm thank you" but when I looked up he was gone but there was four boxes rapped up bye a tree with a Mirror woven into it it was almost like a vanity made out of a tree.
I picked up the boxes and set them on this table. They were all numbered one,two,three,four.
I opend number one and it was a bouquet or blood red and black and white roses, number two was a box of make up with blood red lip stick white con seller witch was the same color of my skin and black and red eye shadow with make up brushes, number two was a Gray long sleeve short flowey dress with had bones on it and number four was a pair of black and grey shoes with a sparkly cross bone pendent. I got dressed and did my make up and waited for frank to come back
3 hr later
I was woken up by someone stroking my cheek. As I looked up I realized it was just frank and smiled up at him "hey are you ready sweetie?" Asked frank sweetly as he smiled down at me and helped me up "yeah and oh thank you for the dress and the flowers and the make up it was amazing thank you I have never had anyone treat me like this before" I replied smiling up at him and rapping my arms around his waist and hugging him tightly. "You mean to tell me no one has every took you on a date before or treated you like an amazing princess well that's surprising I guess I get to say I was the first man to ever take you on an amazing date....whelp we best be off we have a night planned for use and the quicker we get there the quicker we get to have fun rd
Lots of walking later
"We are here mavey waves" he said chuckling
"What's with the new nick name" I asked jokingly "oh I just thought you might want an interesting name" he blushed " no it's ok I like it frankiestine" I laughed when he smirked at the use of his new nick name , "well why don't you sit down" frank said as he sat down on a blanket in front of the beach we were by. "Wow this is beautiful!" I said in amazement looking out at the beautiful red and orang sun set in front of me "yeah well I made it for you so it better be" he mumbled as I looked up at him I reached for his necklace that had a little black and red wedding ring. " oh its for my wife" he said looking down at me and at that moment my heart had been shattered into a million pieces and stomped on buy frank and his wife. "Oh you umm have a wife" I say sadly " oh no it's for my wife if I ever get married to someone im not actually married" he said quickly blushing. " oh ok" I said feeling relieved.
I leaned my head agents his chest as he shifted so his arms were rapped around my waist
I fell asleep like this and when I woke up I was tangled in frank up agents a tree with my head now on his shoulder as I straddled him. I bolted up quickly and backed away from him but bumped into someone along the way "hey Mavis" I herd Gerard say from behind me, I jumped and turned around to face him "oh hi gee" I smiled up at him "come with me for a walk I would like to talk to you" he said smiling down at me "ok what's up?" I asked confused as to what he needed to talk to me about " your in love and your in love with a demon" Gerard chuckled "what? No! No no no I'm not really me and frank are just friends" I said quickly stuttering over my words "oh really I saw the disappointed look on your face last night when you thought he was married and the way you look at him with these big Doe eyes and you always look like you want to tell him you love him but you can't because you aren't sure" Gerard said calmly. "Umm oh" I said a little nervouse I was falling in love with a demon, I mean I think I do really love him I think I do. "Well we should get back Frankie's profoundly wKing up soon and when he see you gone he will be worried so let's go.

Notes

Hey guys nice long chpater for yew I will be posting agiain in a min

Comments

thank you for pointing this out I type this all on my phone because at the moment my laptop is broken but I will go back and fix all of it so thank you for pointing this out and no you never came across as rude

@Artzzz

Vannagore Vannagore
7/18/14

Hi, I'm sorry to point this out before I even started reading your story. But, that's the whole point of my comment. I saw the summary for your story on the "Gerard Way" tag but the problem is that even in the summary, you have a billion typos and mistakes in grammar...
I hate grammar police assholes who correct people's comments or tweets, but fanfiction is basically literature, and in literature you have to take grammatical rules and spelling seriously. Your idea is great, and I would read it, but it's not "pretty" to look at, and that costs you readers.
I have no intention of coming off as rude or a little-miss-know-it-all, but please, for the love of whatever you believe in, either get a beta or proofread EVERYTHING you write twice before considering posting them.

Artzzz Artzzz
7/18/14