ghost girl

I stood up to turn around again but then a loud screech was made and I feel over and yelped and clutched my head. I felt someone try to lift me up but fail because I screamed again cause the screech to get louder. I blacked out until I started to see a bright light
"mavis please wake please please wake up" cried my older brother max.......MAX
I jolted up in a hospital bed "no" I cried hugging man "I loved him and now he's gone" I cried even louder "what are you talking about mavis" max looked at me confused
"I- I got to go I need to leave" I said standing up and picking up my cloths from the chair and running to the bathroom to quickly change and then I ran out but I was stopped bye max
"where are you going mavis and how are you moving this quickly you have three knife wounds" max yelled at me "max I love you so much and im sorry but I have to do this" I said crying and quickly kissed his cheek and hugged him and ran out. I ran I ran all the way to the forest and to the bridge. I stood on the edge and jumped and as I fell I smiled the biggest smile in the world but then the world fell black

Notes

hey guys this is not the end there will be many more chapters to go