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I love this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hmmm, I love this story, like loads!!! Thanks for the mention by the way!!! And here is one of those cool pictures for you and your readers :3
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@Clockwork.Sanity
That was my favorite part of this chapter, really. I was really in the mood when I wrote it, meaning I was half-asleep and grumpy. I do my best work when I'm about to bite someone's head off.
You deserve more. From what I've already read (my wifi was being difficult again so only half of the first chapter) you are an awesome writer. I'm in a language arts class that's higher than honors, so that might be a factor in it. And all of the honors kids worship me. The standard classes just don't give a flying rat's ass.
This chapter is BEAUTIFUL. Especially the paragraph about what Frank learned, or lack thereof. This is just simply... There are no words.
@Stitches
That's so awesome, dude!
As for me, I got like maybe one fan out of our Creative Writing class in highschool. The rest of the high schoolers and middle schoolers were just like 0_____0
@Clockwork.Sanity
It's in a new tab, my friend.
I haven't posted mine on anything yet; I really want to finish it before I put it anywhere, just in case there are plot changes or mistakes to be fixed.
At school, I had to read a short story I wrote for my language arts class, and it spread around the school, so now I'm like this famous local writer in our middle school. It's so cool!
@Stitches
I write psychological thriller/horror, too!
You can find it here: Reprogrammed at DeviantArt.com
Just click on the Gallery tab and one of the folders on the left will be named "Reprogrammed: Book One"
@Clockwork.Sanity
YOU HAVE YOUR OWN NOVEL LEMME READ IT LEMME READ IT
Not kidding, I want to read it. It has cyborg zombies, I must read it.
I'm actually working on my own, also. It's more psychological than horror, but the twist ending is fabulous.
@Stitches
AWESOME, DUDE. I went as my own brand of zombie the year before my psychotic bird/bag lady one. They're like cyborgs kinda. They're my original creations from one of my novels. Anyway, I went to hang out at my boyfriend's house with his family in all my raggedy get-up, teased to a Torofro hair, and special effects makeup. I scared small children. No one thought it was very cool, but I was like "If y'all wanted someone cool, Trav is dating the WRONG person." XP
Of course, he's my ex now and we're both happily single 'cause we're more career-minded than relationship-minded.
@Clockwork.Sanity
I went to a Halloween party (MY FIRST PARTY AH) in full-on zombie wear -- and I mean, make-up, peeling flesh, drool, ripped clothing, blood -- and I was so out there, while everyone else was dressed as hippies and movies characters. Nothing at all original. With mine, you had never seen this particular zombie nurse before. I even tried to eat a dog for fuck's sake.
@Stitches
I do that with "Blood" and "Sleep" ALLLLL that time. Also, anytimes I hear "react" I always break out into the first few lines of Pierce the Veil's "The Balcony Scene."
I went to a New Year's get-together with white-sprayed hair, sparkles, firework makeup, and Revenge get-up. I. LOVED. IT. I was so out-of-place and it made me so happy.
@Clockwork.Sanity
I love the reactions I get when I say strange things. I'll burst into song whenever a key word is mentioned ("I GAVE YOU BLOOD, BLOOD, GALLONS OF THE STUFF") and laughed when people look at me like I'm mad. Which I am, a little, but aren't all the most interesting people the craziest?
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