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@Dark Violet
First off, THANK YOU for writing such a glorious and beautiful comment! I think I squeed a little when I saw it and first read it. So much so that I had to go back and reread it once again! XD
I don't always succeed but I DO try to make my characters relatable to those reading in some sort of way. What fun is a character that you can't relate to in some form or fashion? And I agree, it takes a strong will and bravery to up and leave ones entire life behind to follow ones heart. And thank you! I wanted her to find her core in a "real" place, not to say that the corporate ladder ISN'T a real place. But a little diner in Jersey is a nitty gritty and real place in the world and good solid foundation on which to build one's self.
And you have no idea how much I love the fact that you love her photography and her journal entries! That's a little of what I do in real life that I superimposed on Jay's character. I wanted an artistic character that was different enough from the guys but that would still fit in with their very own form of art. It really is my favorite part to write. I'm constantly writing down ideas for her entries or photographs!
And I'm SO sorry this is a long winded reply! I have a horrible problem with doing this hahaha!!!
And yes, fictional Frankie may need to lay off the sugar a bit. But I just can't seem to keep him away from it!!!
First off, THANK YOU for writing such a glorious and beautiful comment! I think I squeed a little when I saw it and first read it. So much so that I had to go back and reread it once again! XD
I don't always succeed but I DO try to make my characters relatable to those reading in some sort of way. What fun is a character that you can't relate to in some form or fashion? And I agree, it takes a strong will and bravery to up and leave ones entire life behind to follow ones heart. And thank you! I wanted her to find her core in a "real" place, not to say that the corporate ladder ISN'T a real place. But a little diner in Jersey is a nitty gritty and real place in the world and good solid foundation on which to build one's self.
And you have no idea how much I love the fact that you love her photography and her journal entries! That's a little of what I do in real life that I superimposed on Jay's character. I wanted an artistic character that was different enough from the guys but that would still fit in with their very own form of art. It really is my favorite part to write. I'm constantly writing down ideas for her entries or photographs!
And I'm SO sorry this is a long winded reply! I have a horrible problem with doing this hahaha!!!
And yes, fictional Frankie may need to lay off the sugar a bit. But I just can't seem to keep him away from it!!!
@pikey forever xXx
Oh my goodness, oh my goodness!!! I am SO glad that you're liking my story!!! Eeep!!! XD
I will be getting you more right on the double my dear!!! PROMISE!!!
Oh my goodness, oh my goodness!!! I am SO glad that you're liking my story!!! Eeep!!! XD
I will be getting you more right on the double my dear!!! PROMISE!!!
I really like this ALOT! I can relate to Jay struggle of finding herself and her bravery of leaving everything behind and following her heart. I also like her journal entries and the artistic vibe of the story. I like their relationships, or the start of one. It's interesting how she's finding her core in a little diner in Jersey instead of climbing the corporate ladder like most people.
Keep updating, I enjoyed every chapter!
PS fictional Frankie needs to lay off the sugar
Keep updating, I enjoyed every chapter!
PS fictional Frankie needs to lay off the sugar
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Yaaaaaay!!! I'm so glad! I'll be updating more later today!!!
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