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@Skyegirl96
Oh thank you, thank you, thank you for those words! I got a pretty nasty comment sometime back and it really took me back a step or two when I looked at my writing. I see it as foolish now, but it took me a bit to come back into it. And what really helped was people like you and the others who have commented and given me my confidence back. So thank you times like WHOA for that! I know my style of writing is not like a lot of other people's but I am glad that you appreciate it! I do tend to write in an unrushed manner because, well life to me happens unrushed. So that tends to be how I write! So you continue to reread and I'll finishing working on these two new updates so you have something new to read!!!
Oh thank you, thank you, thank you for those words! I got a pretty nasty comment sometime back and it really took me back a step or two when I looked at my writing. I see it as foolish now, but it took me a bit to come back into it. And what really helped was people like you and the others who have commented and given me my confidence back. So thank you times like WHOA for that! I know my style of writing is not like a lot of other people's but I am glad that you appreciate it! I do tend to write in an unrushed manner because, well life to me happens unrushed. So that tends to be how I write! So you continue to reread and I'll finishing working on these two new updates so you have something new to read!!!
I hope you got my reply because it didn't put your name in it the first time I posted.
And then I edited it in and I don't know if it worked.
Eep!
And then I edited it in and I don't know if it worked.
Eep!
@surrenderthenight
Hahaha I am SO glad that you're liking it so far!!! You have no idea how much I love hearing those words my dear!!! To hear that my writing is beautiful is wonderful! And I'm working on a new set of chapter updates right now as we speak! I updated my other story so I am now working on this one! I hope that helps with the anxiety hahaha!!! And well she has had a sort of small emotional break already, after her attack when she finally made it back to that spot in the alley. When she defaced the alley the way it had helped in the defacing of her. But that being said, some people do bottle emotions. And they bottle them, and they bottle them until the pressure is too much and they just come apart at the seams. And well, we haven't bottled enough for that type of melt down to come yet. And I only say yet because there is a LOT more to come for Jay. So just you hold onto your sweet little self and enjoy the ride of what's to come.
I hope I can keep your good will as my writing continues!
Hahaha I am SO glad that you're liking it so far!!! You have no idea how much I love hearing those words my dear!!! To hear that my writing is beautiful is wonderful! And I'm working on a new set of chapter updates right now as we speak! I updated my other story so I am now working on this one! I hope that helps with the anxiety hahaha!!! And well she has had a sort of small emotional break already, after her attack when she finally made it back to that spot in the alley. When she defaced the alley the way it had helped in the defacing of her. But that being said, some people do bottle emotions. And they bottle them, and they bottle them until the pressure is too much and they just come apart at the seams. And well, we haven't bottled enough for that type of melt down to come yet. And I only say yet because there is a LOT more to come for Jay. So just you hold onto your sweet little self and enjoy the ride of what's to come.
I hope I can keep your good will as my writing continues!
@Burnt_Bridges_Fall
Can you please update? I really love this and am dying to know what happens next!! It's such a good story!! I've read all the chapters and I was up until 3 in the morning to do it!!
Can you please update? I really love this and am dying to know what happens next!! It's such a good story!! I've read all the chapters and I was up until 3 in the morning to do it!!
This is literally one of the best stories I have ever read. No joke. It is beautifully written, and unlike most fan-fics I've read completely unrushed. I can't wait for more chapters, and in the mean time I will re-read this story because it is amazing. You truely have a gift for writing.
This story is so beautiful i love it. I read all 42 chapters in one day and im anixous to read whats next. What i'd like to see is Jay kinda of have an emotional break. I mean because then her character will grow because she's so strong and stubborn i would like to see her break because after all she's only human and not perfect. Like there is so much we know about her but i feel like there could be this other darker side of her that know one knows and it would be fun to play on that. It would make the story well-rounded and EXTRA interesting. Do you know what i mean? Please keep on writting i love it. You're amazing!!
@Sephie666
Eeps!!! I just updated two chapters a few hours ago!!! And I'm currently writing more like whoa!
Promise, promise, promise!!! I'm all over updates like white on rice! Just give a poor girl some time to bandage her poor bleeding finger nubs hahaha!!!
But I am SO glad that you are addicted to my story! I shall get you your next fix so the withdrawls are as bad this time around! Honest!!!
*wraps fingers in bandages and gets back to the grind stone*
Eeps!!! I just updated two chapters a few hours ago!!! And I'm currently writing more like whoa!
Promise, promise, promise!!! I'm all over updates like white on rice! Just give a poor girl some time to bandage her poor bleeding finger nubs hahaha!!!
But I am SO glad that you are addicted to my story! I shall get you your next fix so the withdrawls are as bad this time around! Honest!!!
*wraps fingers in bandages and gets back to the grind stone*
Update woman! I tell you UPDATE! You have me addicted to this story and I was starting to go through withdrawal symptoms without it!
@Dark Violet
Oh god I love paintball! And padded suits, even slightly padded suits, are a mad must!!! Because those little pellets of paint HURT! Hahaha!!! I hope that you went paintballing for your birthday my dear!
And yes, Ray is slowly but surely joining the sane club of which Bob is the team captain! And I think he just might be able to be your vehicle for grounding Mikey! He definitely has the way about him to be able to call them out on their bullshit! Bob is the protector of all, Ray has the roll of calling it like it is!
And yes, Bad Mikey indeed! But hey, psych out your enemy right? And did he do it becasue he was just telling Gerard that his favorite Maiden shirt was now covered in spooge? Or was it because he has some understanding of what his brother feels for Jay? Hard to tell isn't it? And if he knows even some about his brothers feelings then why is he continuing to be with Jay? Tricky, tricky, tricky!
I TOTALLY agree with you about the Voldemort thing! Because what is there to do when you have all your pieces? Are you more protected when you are missing pieces? Less vunerable? And I agree, I think that when we lose something we most definitely find a piece. Losing something opens up our eyes a little more and allows us to see a piece. And daring to do something different most DEFINITELY lets you find another piece, or pieces. Because we're expanding our selves, testing new boundries and so we find something we didn't know we were missing until we tried! Mid life crisis for the piece finding win! If people don't find their pieces in the first part of their lives at least they have mid life crisis to look forward too! Find a stack of pieces all at once while you're cruising in your flaming red shiny sports car! XD
And BWUAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! Alas my dear (now) Canadian friend I am not Canadian. That being said, I do have Canadian family! So maybe they rubbed off on me over the years hahaha! And "eh" is the perfect word! It expresses so much!
And sad day! Even kissing friends makes it all go to shit? Oh noes!!!! I'd be very sad to have that happen! But as you said, it doesn't work with all people or even all friends. It really is a person to person changing situation.
I'm updating now and then will be writing more as I deal with storm Nemo!
Oh god I love paintball! And padded suits, even slightly padded suits, are a mad must!!! Because those little pellets of paint HURT! Hahaha!!! I hope that you went paintballing for your birthday my dear!
And yes, Ray is slowly but surely joining the sane club of which Bob is the team captain! And I think he just might be able to be your vehicle for grounding Mikey! He definitely has the way about him to be able to call them out on their bullshit! Bob is the protector of all, Ray has the roll of calling it like it is!
And yes, Bad Mikey indeed! But hey, psych out your enemy right? And did he do it becasue he was just telling Gerard that his favorite Maiden shirt was now covered in spooge? Or was it because he has some understanding of what his brother feels for Jay? Hard to tell isn't it? And if he knows even some about his brothers feelings then why is he continuing to be with Jay? Tricky, tricky, tricky!
I TOTALLY agree with you about the Voldemort thing! Because what is there to do when you have all your pieces? Are you more protected when you are missing pieces? Less vunerable? And I agree, I think that when we lose something we most definitely find a piece. Losing something opens up our eyes a little more and allows us to see a piece. And daring to do something different most DEFINITELY lets you find another piece, or pieces. Because we're expanding our selves, testing new boundries and so we find something we didn't know we were missing until we tried! Mid life crisis for the piece finding win! If people don't find their pieces in the first part of their lives at least they have mid life crisis to look forward too! Find a stack of pieces all at once while you're cruising in your flaming red shiny sports car! XD
And BWUAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! Alas my dear (now) Canadian friend I am not Canadian. That being said, I do have Canadian family! So maybe they rubbed off on me over the years hahaha! And "eh" is the perfect word! It expresses so much!
And sad day! Even kissing friends makes it all go to shit? Oh noes!!!! I'd be very sad to have that happen! But as you said, it doesn't work with all people or even all friends. It really is a person to person changing situation.
I'm updating now and then will be writing more as I deal with storm Nemo!
Man a padded suit wouldve sure came in handy the last time I played paintball, the best the guys I played with could come up with is shoot me in the ass when the game was over and THEY lost! it sure did burn! lol. I miss paintball...I think I might go to the shooting range for my bday.
Anyway, Ray is in the loop!! Bob is not alone in his sane people club! Im glad Ray is onto Gerard, Bob might not be the person to get involve and say anything but I can defintly see Ray calling them out on their bullshit! He could be my vessel in my grounding Michael scheme!
I couldn't believe Michael telling that crap to Gee about wiping the couch down with his tshirt. That was a complete douche move (pardon my French), which makes me think that in his little tiny boy brain he knows Gee has feelings and feels the urge to mark his territory. Bad Michael! BAD!
Lol Voldemort was onto something, the way he scattered pieces of his soul all over the place. I think sometimes the greatest pieces are disguised in loses. It's when we lose something, I think we find another piece. When we dare to do something different, we find a piece. When we allow ourselves to feel, and hurt and love and live life, really live it, that's when we find pieces. You can find little pieces all over the place. Trouble is most people dont know about the little pieces they could find. That's what middle life crisis is for lol.
You made Bob say eh....I wonder if you're Canadian...I'm just curious...I know it's a stereotype and not all Canadians say eh but a lot of us do...I'm Canadian and I say eh. It's a useful filler.
The whole sleeping with friends, I could see how it might work for some people. It's just never worked for me. Not even sleeping with friends, just even kissing a friend and everything goes to shit lol.
Please update soon! Pwease!!!
Anyway, Ray is in the loop!! Bob is not alone in his sane people club! Im glad Ray is onto Gerard, Bob might not be the person to get involve and say anything but I can defintly see Ray calling them out on their bullshit! He could be my vessel in my grounding Michael scheme!
I couldn't believe Michael telling that crap to Gee about wiping the couch down with his tshirt. That was a complete douche move (pardon my French), which makes me think that in his little tiny boy brain he knows Gee has feelings and feels the urge to mark his territory. Bad Michael! BAD!
Lol Voldemort was onto something, the way he scattered pieces of his soul all over the place. I think sometimes the greatest pieces are disguised in loses. It's when we lose something, I think we find another piece. When we dare to do something different, we find a piece. When we allow ourselves to feel, and hurt and love and live life, really live it, that's when we find pieces. You can find little pieces all over the place. Trouble is most people dont know about the little pieces they could find. That's what middle life crisis is for lol.
You made Bob say eh....I wonder if you're Canadian...I'm just curious...I know it's a stereotype and not all Canadians say eh but a lot of us do...I'm Canadian and I say eh. It's a useful filler.
The whole sleeping with friends, I could see how it might work for some people. It's just never worked for me. Not even sleeping with friends, just even kissing a friend and everything goes to shit lol.
Please update soon! Pwease!!!
@Dark Violet
Oh yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay!!! I'm so glad that you liked the dedications!!! I hope that you caught all four of them!!! I'm pretty sure that I put one at the end of all four new chapters!!! And I LOVE the idea of having someone buy me a book that reminds them of me and then dedicating it to me! Of that's a brilliantly beautiful idea that I may have to gank from you if you don't mind hahha! Yay for being your favorite person! I think I like this new current title! *does new favorite person dance* And I am SO glad that you totally nerded out and went to go see them before reading. That totally made my night!!!
Now. . . Ahem. . .
That's one of my favorite parts too!!! I absolutely LOVE the concept and it's something I believe in whole heartedly. It's why I say that in your life you need to go as many places as possible, to see, touch, experience and taste as many things as you can. How else are you suppose to find all the pieces that make up your whole? I believe that upon creation our internal selves are split and scattered far and wide and our job is to find them. With every day we live, with every mile we drive and thing we experience we come one step closer to a piece.I'm so glad that you got that with so little words written! That makes my day that you were able to see that underlying idea and then actually sat and thought about it. I've found pieces, but I know for a fact that I haven't found all my pieces! And to be honest, I don't know what would happen if we never found them all or some went missing. It's an interesting thing to ponder really. . .
Awww no pulling a Frankie! I didn't mean to make you pull a Frankie!!! But I totally agree! It's a total WTF Mikey situation! But no, no he doesn't really see it. That happens sometimes with siblings though. But why can Bob see it and no one else? I think because Bob has always struck me as all knowing and so that is how I have written him. And sometimes, well sometimes it takes an outsider to really see what's going on. And technically Mikey is too close to really see or understand. He's almost stuck in the middle, even though it's no strings attached sex/fun/whatever. And how is that possible? How is it possible to stay friends once you've slept with somebody/seen them naked? Extremely easy actually. I've slept with some of my friends (holy TMI Batman, but it's to prove a point I guess) and we're still the greatest of friends. It is possible and that is how I am writing it. I never write "nun" characters really because that just isn't really me, but I try and balance it when I want a character to be unattached by a relationship or whatever. So twist? Maybe. Maybe not. You shall have to see how it unfolds my dear!
That all being said. . . Go right ahead and strangle/throttle/ground Mikey as much as you'd like hahhaa!! I think it's a splendid idea in my book! And I think he totally needs it. Though I do think he is doing an okay job with controlling himself. Mostly. Kind of. Ha! And ohmygoodness ohmygoodness. . . NO NERVOUS BREAKDOWNS!!!! Eegads woman I can't have you hyperventilating on me now! Breathe!! Who knows what my favorite saying "NO WAY BABIES!!!" may turn into. Right now it just is what it is. >:3
And I will explain more of why that was Gee's initial reaction as the story unfolds in the coming chapters. Interesting reaction though isn't it? But then again. . . Don't you automatically run to your best friend when something bad has happened?
I hope you enjoy what else I will be posting!!!
Oh yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay!!! I'm so glad that you liked the dedications!!! I hope that you caught all four of them!!! I'm pretty sure that I put one at the end of all four new chapters!!! And I LOVE the idea of having someone buy me a book that reminds them of me and then dedicating it to me! Of that's a brilliantly beautiful idea that I may have to gank from you if you don't mind hahha! Yay for being your favorite person! I think I like this new current title! *does new favorite person dance* And I am SO glad that you totally nerded out and went to go see them before reading. That totally made my night!!!
Now. . . Ahem. . .
That's one of my favorite parts too!!! I absolutely LOVE the concept and it's something I believe in whole heartedly. It's why I say that in your life you need to go as many places as possible, to see, touch, experience and taste as many things as you can. How else are you suppose to find all the pieces that make up your whole? I believe that upon creation our internal selves are split and scattered far and wide and our job is to find them. With every day we live, with every mile we drive and thing we experience we come one step closer to a piece.I'm so glad that you got that with so little words written! That makes my day that you were able to see that underlying idea and then actually sat and thought about it. I've found pieces, but I know for a fact that I haven't found all my pieces! And to be honest, I don't know what would happen if we never found them all or some went missing. It's an interesting thing to ponder really. . .
Awww no pulling a Frankie! I didn't mean to make you pull a Frankie!!! But I totally agree! It's a total WTF Mikey situation! But no, no he doesn't really see it. That happens sometimes with siblings though. But why can Bob see it and no one else? I think because Bob has always struck me as all knowing and so that is how I have written him. And sometimes, well sometimes it takes an outsider to really see what's going on. And technically Mikey is too close to really see or understand. He's almost stuck in the middle, even though it's no strings attached sex/fun/whatever. And how is that possible? How is it possible to stay friends once you've slept with somebody/seen them naked? Extremely easy actually. I've slept with some of my friends (holy TMI Batman, but it's to prove a point I guess) and we're still the greatest of friends. It is possible and that is how I am writing it. I never write "nun" characters really because that just isn't really me, but I try and balance it when I want a character to be unattached by a relationship or whatever. So twist? Maybe. Maybe not. You shall have to see how it unfolds my dear!
That all being said. . . Go right ahead and strangle/throttle/ground Mikey as much as you'd like hahhaa!! I think it's a splendid idea in my book! And I think he totally needs it. Though I do think he is doing an okay job with controlling himself. Mostly. Kind of. Ha! And ohmygoodness ohmygoodness. . . NO NERVOUS BREAKDOWNS!!!! Eegads woman I can't have you hyperventilating on me now! Breathe!! Who knows what my favorite saying "NO WAY BABIES!!!" may turn into. Right now it just is what it is. >:3
And I will explain more of why that was Gee's initial reaction as the story unfolds in the coming chapters. Interesting reaction though isn't it? But then again. . . Don't you automatically run to your best friend when something bad has happened?
I hope you enjoy what else I will be posting!!!
Oh and I think it would be nice if you expanded a little on the fact that Gee's first reaction to a fight with his GF is to go to Jay's. *does a Frankie and sits in a corner, glaring at Michael*
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!
You dedicated chapters to me!!!!!! AWWWWW no one has ever done that for me! That meant so much!! I always try to hint at my absolute dream bday gift, all I want was for someone to get me a book that made them think of me and dedicate it to me! And you dedicated original material to me! You might be my favorite person right now...Just saying!
I was a complete nerd too, I totally went to check out the dedication, scrolling past the story so I dont ruin it for myself!
Anyway, now that I got that out of the way...I think my favorite part so far, possibly one of my favorite parts in the story so far is when her and Gee are talking about how she belongs in Jersey and how the rest of her just had to catch up. I think it's a beautiful concept, it made me think a little. What if we have parts of ourselves scattered all over the place and we just have to find them to complete our puzzle. It's an interesting thing to ponder over, made me think of the ashes to ashes, dust to dust verse. I mean, what if when we're born the greater power (I'm using general terms cuz I think the greater power is an individual thing) scatters a bit of our ashes in certain area and we're supposed to go through life finding it a piece at the time. Some find it in music, some in nature, some in their loved ones.
I don't know if I made any sense but I think the concept is beautiful. And what happens if we dont find it, or a piece goes missing? I like the idea that there are parts of us we havent found yet but when we will, it'll all make more sense.
Can I say something here?...WTF Mikey?! ugh Im mad at Mikey and I shouldn't be but I am. I mean, I know Gee is with Sharon and all but is MR Michael Way blind?! Doesnt he see his older brother has feelings for Jay? I was literally pulling a Frankie and glaring at him the whole time the party was going on. I understand that they're adults and it's their business who they sleep with and they're just friends but COME ON MICHAEL!
Can I ground him? Can I just swoop into the story, grab him by the ear and ground him till Jay figures her shit and Gee finally gets a grip on reality? Can I do it? please? lol I should just write my own spin off of how I grounded him!
Jokes aside, doesnt he see it? Its his own brother, Bob sees it. Why doesn't he see it??
And the whole just friends thing? How is that gonna work? they've seen each other naked but they're gonna be friends? Like nothing happened? I'm sensing a twist.......
NO WAY BABIES! Omg is she gonna get pregnant with a Way baby?! its the wrong Way!!!!!!
I think I'm having a nervous breakdown so please update soon!
You dedicated chapters to me!!!!!! AWWWWW no one has ever done that for me! That meant so much!! I always try to hint at my absolute dream bday gift, all I want was for someone to get me a book that made them think of me and dedicate it to me! And you dedicated original material to me! You might be my favorite person right now...Just saying!
I was a complete nerd too, I totally went to check out the dedication, scrolling past the story so I dont ruin it for myself!
Anyway, now that I got that out of the way...I think my favorite part so far, possibly one of my favorite parts in the story so far is when her and Gee are talking about how she belongs in Jersey and how the rest of her just had to catch up. I think it's a beautiful concept, it made me think a little. What if we have parts of ourselves scattered all over the place and we just have to find them to complete our puzzle. It's an interesting thing to ponder over, made me think of the ashes to ashes, dust to dust verse. I mean, what if when we're born the greater power (I'm using general terms cuz I think the greater power is an individual thing) scatters a bit of our ashes in certain area and we're supposed to go through life finding it a piece at the time. Some find it in music, some in nature, some in their loved ones.
I don't know if I made any sense but I think the concept is beautiful. And what happens if we dont find it, or a piece goes missing? I like the idea that there are parts of us we havent found yet but when we will, it'll all make more sense.
Can I say something here?...WTF Mikey?! ugh Im mad at Mikey and I shouldn't be but I am. I mean, I know Gee is with Sharon and all but is MR Michael Way blind?! Doesnt he see his older brother has feelings for Jay? I was literally pulling a Frankie and glaring at him the whole time the party was going on. I understand that they're adults and it's their business who they sleep with and they're just friends but COME ON MICHAEL!
Can I ground him? Can I just swoop into the story, grab him by the ear and ground him till Jay figures her shit and Gee finally gets a grip on reality? Can I do it? please? lol I should just write my own spin off of how I grounded him!
Jokes aside, doesnt he see it? Its his own brother, Bob sees it. Why doesn't he see it??
And the whole just friends thing? How is that gonna work? they've seen each other naked but they're gonna be friends? Like nothing happened? I'm sensing a twist.......
NO WAY BABIES! Omg is she gonna get pregnant with a Way baby?! its the wrong Way!!!!!!
I think I'm having a nervous breakdown so please update soon!
@Dark Violet
Don't worry about it my dear! I got sick so I too was MIA from here! Gotta love when that happens eh? Pluh. First off. . . HAPPY FREAKING EARLY BIRTHDAY!!!! Now that being said (for the first time in this post. . .) I couldn't agree with you more!!! Now don't get me wrong, I love the internet. It allows me to do so much more in the world. It allows me to reach so many people. But I TOTALLY agree. They've become faceless in the sense that they lack so much of the personal interaction that we had! Communicating with people solely over the internet can make you forget that there is another person on the other side of the screen, a living, breathing, person with emotions. And as 90's children I totally agree! We played outside! We had tree houses! We weren't allowed to watch television for more then an hour, if that! Ugh, I gotta be careful or I'll start ranting too! 90's kids unite hahaha!!! Course, these teens now adays (the non 90's variety) aren't all bad so I try to judge person to person.
And oh my gosh, I really don't have words. Reading how you speak about my writing really is breath taking. I get to see my writing and my story telling in a whole new light. Hearing what you have to say really sheds a light on it in a way I've never known. There is no amount of words I could use to say thank you, there aren't enough meaningful words to say thank you. So just know that that's what I mean, every time I say it. I try to impart a little something into my readers with every chapter I write and post. Not always so deep and mystic, but sometimes just the idea that they can look at something mundane and see something else. Does it always work? No, but I try regardless. I feel that that is the job of a writer. It is our job to impart beauty and imagination and continous thought into the world. We are the creators of magic and adventure, of love and heart ache. We are the painters of dreams and imagination. And now, I start to sound a little like my mother so I'm going to quit while I'm ahead!
So thank you for everything! You keep reading, pondering, and laughing. And I'll keep trying not to screw my end up to bad eh? ;) Oh and I TOTALLY dedicated the four new chapters I posted to you! BECAUSE IT'S YOUR BIRTHDAY SOON!!!! Uh!
And I know right? Alcohol is the purveyor of many a grand and disasterous thing. And hey, jumping off the roof onto a trampoline isn't a bad thing! And definitely a thing people do sober hahaha!!! Though you are right, it does to a certain extent bring the genuine person out of people. It unleahses flood gates on all the things we keep locked up so tight because we're afraid of how that side of us will be perceived. It lessons ones inhabitions and so allows us to speak more freely, laugh louder, dance stranger, and even get close to someone we've kept at a distance for no sane reason at all.
Pheeuwph that was freaking LONG! I'm so glad we're both long winded or else I'd feel like an eeeeediot!
That being said. . .
HAPPY EARLY FREAKING BIRTHDAY!!!
Don't worry about it my dear! I got sick so I too was MIA from here! Gotta love when that happens eh? Pluh. First off. . . HAPPY FREAKING EARLY BIRTHDAY!!!! Now that being said (for the first time in this post. . .) I couldn't agree with you more!!! Now don't get me wrong, I love the internet. It allows me to do so much more in the world. It allows me to reach so many people. But I TOTALLY agree. They've become faceless in the sense that they lack so much of the personal interaction that we had! Communicating with people solely over the internet can make you forget that there is another person on the other side of the screen, a living, breathing, person with emotions. And as 90's children I totally agree! We played outside! We had tree houses! We weren't allowed to watch television for more then an hour, if that! Ugh, I gotta be careful or I'll start ranting too! 90's kids unite hahaha!!! Course, these teens now adays (the non 90's variety) aren't all bad so I try to judge person to person.
And oh my gosh, I really don't have words. Reading how you speak about my writing really is breath taking. I get to see my writing and my story telling in a whole new light. Hearing what you have to say really sheds a light on it in a way I've never known. There is no amount of words I could use to say thank you, there aren't enough meaningful words to say thank you. So just know that that's what I mean, every time I say it. I try to impart a little something into my readers with every chapter I write and post. Not always so deep and mystic, but sometimes just the idea that they can look at something mundane and see something else. Does it always work? No, but I try regardless. I feel that that is the job of a writer. It is our job to impart beauty and imagination and continous thought into the world. We are the creators of magic and adventure, of love and heart ache. We are the painters of dreams and imagination. And now, I start to sound a little like my mother so I'm going to quit while I'm ahead!
So thank you for everything! You keep reading, pondering, and laughing. And I'll keep trying not to screw my end up to bad eh? ;) Oh and I TOTALLY dedicated the four new chapters I posted to you! BECAUSE IT'S YOUR BIRTHDAY SOON!!!! Uh!
And I know right? Alcohol is the purveyor of many a grand and disasterous thing. And hey, jumping off the roof onto a trampoline isn't a bad thing! And definitely a thing people do sober hahaha!!! Though you are right, it does to a certain extent bring the genuine person out of people. It unleahses flood gates on all the things we keep locked up so tight because we're afraid of how that side of us will be perceived. It lessons ones inhabitions and so allows us to speak more freely, laugh louder, dance stranger, and even get close to someone we've kept at a distance for no sane reason at all.
Pheeuwph that was freaking LONG! I'm so glad we're both long winded or else I'd feel like an eeeeediot!
That being said. . .
HAPPY EARLY FREAKING BIRTHDAY!!!
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@Killjoy69SonicSoundwave
I'm sorry for the like multiple quoting of your name and all in this but I'm still trying to figure out the new way of replying to people's posts that doesn't automatically put their names in like it use to. So you are like my multiple choice guinea pig haha! And I am TOTALLY working on new updates my dear! So hold on tight because I'm getting there! And luckily since you've caught up I won't make you have to stay up until 3 am again to catch up! Stay tuned my dear!
7/9/13