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It all started with a Hello

Chapter Eight

Frank's POV:

We all end up staying in our vampire forms for the rest of the day. It's pretty cool because all of us have a different colour glow. I'm guessing this is why Gerard was always so cold to my touch whenever we touched each other, now I don't feel that cold when I touch him. He feels normal. I am so drawn into the glows though. They are quite magnificent because our eyes match the colour of our glow.

Mikey's glow was a pure white and almost looked like it has a snowy texture. He looked angelic and peaceful. His eyes are a snow white as well. His colour compliments his mate's quite beautifully.

Ray's glow is a very light water blue. The texture is rippling and wavy. He had this quiet and serene appearance to him. His whole eyes were a beautiful shade of blue that wasn't too distracting but was enough to draw you in.

Gerard's glow was a smokey black. It has the texture of smoke and always was fading off of him. His was the most intriguing because it gave a mysterious vibe. He looked happy and sexy. That may be a bit of my bias speaking but fuck did he always look hot. His eyes all black and beautiful. They fit him perfectly.

Me, I look down to see what glow I give off but I can't see. I'm assuming I have a colour that compliments my mate's because Mikey compliments Ray's blue perfectly. Together they look like the sky.

Gerard looks at me and says, "Dark Red."

I give him a confused expression. "Excuse me? Dark Red? What does that mean?" I ask.

"I noticed you were analyzing the glow we emit. You can't see your own until you can fully harness your powers. Your glow is dark red. Each pairings of mates have themes. Mikey and Ray are the sky but apart they are the cold and water. You and I are the night. Alone I am shadows and you are fire and blood. Colours that compliment each other. It's strange but it works. We will train you on how to use your powers but don't worry it comes quickly." He says and smiles at me. We both look over to see Ray and Mikey making our on the couch across from us. We both laugh. "Hey get a room you two!" Gerard laughs out.

We then decide to try and practice some music so I play the easiest song I know on guitar. Smells like teen sprit by nirvana. They seem pretty impressed because I got the timing down to the exact millisecond. We all just goof off showing each other what we can do. Gerard sings at the top of his lungs, Mikey tries to do cool tricks while he plays. Ray just wanting to watch him and I'm practicing guitar because I haven't played in a few weeks. Today was a great day!

Notes

Comments

@The Resurrectionist
Thanks so much!

AlexInMCRland AlexInMCRland
3/30/17

i lov this !!

@Gee'sCLUELESSgirl!
Thanks for the feedback! I do have to work on the editing. It is still very rough. I am coming back after a day or two to see if it makes sense.

AlexInMCRland AlexInMCRland
3/20/17

Interesting start. I think you need to be careful and edit your chapters more, for instance, I don't think this sentence was what you meant...

~I move out of Brad and look out my window.~

...it would've been funny if you DID mean that, but no. There were a few other mistakes in there, but that's the one that stood out to me.

i really do like this start though, and I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes.
xxx