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It all started with a Hello

Author’s Note

Hello, it’s Alice/Patrick.

I will be continuing this story. I am sorry about my unexplained absence. It is fully explained in the author’s note for the story, “Is it love or is it hate”. I do owe a quick explanation here though.

I’ve been mentally and physically ill for a while, stopping me from doing things I love. I’ve been on the mend so I want to start back up.

I have stuff in the works coming out soon but, I’d like to ask you all what you’d like to see from my stories?

Thank you all. Have a good day/night.

~Alice/Patrick <3

Notes

Comments

@The Resurrectionist
Thanks so much!

AlexInMCRland AlexInMCRland
3/30/17

i lov this !!

The Resurrectionist The Resurrectionist
3/30/17

@Gee'sCLUELESSgirl!
Thanks for the feedback! I do have to work on the editing. It is still very rough. I am coming back after a day or two to see if it makes sense.

AlexInMCRland AlexInMCRland
3/20/17

Interesting start. I think you need to be careful and edit your chapters more, for instance, I don't think this sentence was what you meant...

~I move out of Brad and look out my window.~

...it would've been funny if you DID mean that, but no. There were a few other mistakes in there, but that's the one that stood out to me.

i really do like this start though, and I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes.
xxx

Gee'sCLUELESSgirl! Gee'sCLUELESSgirl!
3/20/17
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