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It all started with a Hello

Chapter Twenty One

Gerard's POV:

"Hey Meg! Time to get up! Grandma wants to meet you today!" I call up to our daughter. Frankie and I are sitting in our living room, he is snuggled in my lap. We are both in vampire form but don't have our wings. I kiss his forehead softly. "Look at our wonderful life my love. I got to marry you, we have a daughter,we live together and we work together." I tell him. He smiles and gives me a soft kiss.

"God, do I fucking love you Gee. I would have never thought that I would be married to a work colleague who also is a vampire. Now I am one too and we have so many good things in our life. You make me so happy." He tells me. I coo and kiss a softly again. I see Meg come down the stairs.

"Ready to go Meg?" I ask and keep Frankie in my arms. He's so light and adorable that I can carry him everywhere.

"Sure! You guys are so adorable together!" She says and smiles at us. We both smile at her. I pick up my Frankie and we all walk out of the house and to the car. We drive to Frankie's mom's and get out of the car. We walk in the house.

"Mom! Come here!" Frankie yells. I hug him from behind and Meg stands beside us.

"Be right there! Is it just you?" She calls back.

"I'm here too!" I call with a giggle. She's so sweet and nice. She's a great mom.

"Hey Gee! I'm surprised you walked in today and didn't teleport like usual!" She says and I hear her get closer. She walks into the room and notices Meg she instantly gets worried. "Hello! Who are you?" She asks. I giggle.

"It's fine mom. She knows. This is Meg. Our daughter." I say and Meg smiles.

Notes

Really quick update and cliffhanger. Sorry, I've been so busy!

Comments

@The Resurrectionist
Thanks so much!

AlexInMCRland AlexInMCRland
3/30/17

i lov this !!

@Gee'sCLUELESSgirl!
Thanks for the feedback! I do have to work on the editing. It is still very rough. I am coming back after a day or two to see if it makes sense.

AlexInMCRland AlexInMCRland
3/20/17

Interesting start. I think you need to be careful and edit your chapters more, for instance, I don't think this sentence was what you meant...

~I move out of Brad and look out my window.~

...it would've been funny if you DID mean that, but no. There were a few other mistakes in there, but that's the one that stood out to me.

i really do like this start though, and I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes.
xxx