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It all started with a Hello

Chapter Seventeen

Frank's POV;

The wedding is today. I'm super excited but super nervous. I love Gerard to bits. I'm dressed as your typical vampire but I have my red eyes, wings and fangs. We can't make it look like we are real because we have humans that don't know about vampires coming to the wedding. Mikey is with Gerard and Ray is with me. Gee and I gave Ray the thumbs up to do something huge tonight. Our crew know, well Mikey doesn't.

"You look amazing Frank. I can't believe you and Gerard are getting married. Are you sure it's okay if I propose tonight? I mean it's your guy's wedding." Ray says as he helps me with my hair.

"Thanks fro. I can't believe I'm marrying the love of my life tonight. You can absolutely propose! I know it's the wedding but you and Mikey deserve to be together." I say and Ray gives me a quick hug. I smile. Gee is already out there, waiting for me and my mom to walk me down the isle. She links with my arm and smiles. The grooms men walk down the isle, all of our friends. My mom and I start walking. I see my beautiful soon to be husband standing at the alter. His eyes shining black and his cute little teethy smile. I get to the alter and my mom gives me a small kiss. I turn to Gee.

The ceremony goes on. Our vows are said. "Will you, Frank Iero take Gerard Way as your lawfully wedded husband?" He asks me I smile at Gee.

"I do. I always will." I say.

"Will you, Gerard Way take Frank Iero as your lawfully wedded husband?" He asks Gee. Gee stares at me.

"I do. I always have." He says.

"You may now place your rings on each other." He says. I take the beautiful red jewelled black banded ring and place it on his finger. He grabs the black jewelled ring with the red band and places it on my my finger. "You may kiss the husband?" He says with a confused tone. I giggle. Gee grabs me and dips me.

"Frank Way-Iero. I love you." He says and kisses me passionately. The kiss was like a firework. Beautiful and amazing. I can't believe he's my husband. My beautiful crazy husband.

"I love you too Gerard Way-Iero." I say. This is an amazing day! I can't wait to see how the rest of it will turn out!

Notes

Comments

@The Resurrectionist
Thanks so much!

AlexInMCRland AlexInMCRland
3/30/17

i lov this !!

@Gee'sCLUELESSgirl!
Thanks for the feedback! I do have to work on the editing. It is still very rough. I am coming back after a day or two to see if it makes sense.

AlexInMCRland AlexInMCRland
3/20/17

Interesting start. I think you need to be careful and edit your chapters more, for instance, I don't think this sentence was what you meant...

~I move out of Brad and look out my window.~

...it would've been funny if you DID mean that, but no. There were a few other mistakes in there, but that's the one that stood out to me.

i really do like this start though, and I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes.
xxx