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Done. Now I just leave him here and go under the stall door. Alright that was a nice release. That kid passed out so I dragged him into the big stall and put him in the corner. He should be fine there.
"Frank!" ugh not this guy again.
"Oh hey Mikey," I smiled, I'm good at acting normal I just choose to be aggressive sometimes instead, unfortunately with Mikey it's never those times.
"Um do you know my brother?"
"Probably, what's his name" smile Frank, smile...ugh. Go. Away.
"Gerard," no fucking way "well I just wanted to know if you'd seen him?"
"No. I would have never guessed he's your brother, you're both so...different" a nerdy jock, and a depressed do-nothing.
"Yeah? A lot of people say that...everyone thinks I'm the cool one, but I think that title goes to Gerard." Why did I ask? For the sake of seeming normal, normal is not worth it.
"Really." I don't care. Just go look for him and leave me alone.
"Yeah, I really wish more people would realize that."
"Oh" Take the hint.
"Well I'll be going now, later Frank." He gave me fist bump and shot me a half smile I shot one back.
Hmm one's socially charismatic and the other can't talk to save his own life...I WOULD know that.

Notes

Yay update, I think this might be my favorite story. It has no storyline so I can do whatever I want with it without worrying about messing up. So enjoy it, leave your comments, and take care. Till next time my lovelies(^-^)

Comments

@JesusofBaltimore
Thanks so much, I was trying to achieve the "diary" feel, without it actually being a diary. I really appreciate how thoroughly you explained what you liked about my story. Twas very constructive and reassuring.

Lollita:3 Lollita:3
1/10/16

I actually really like the way this has been written! I like the impersonal-ness of frank that really does capture the nature of a sociopath (Which, I may add, you're doing great at). I love the really short chapters... makes it seem more like a running commentary or diary sort of thing! I can't wait to read more!

@AnonymousNarwhal
Thank-you for your honesty, but I would like some clarification please.

Lollita:3 Lollita:3
11/8/15

Too fast... This is umm okay. Sorry. I find it interesting that Frank is a sociopath but the way the story is made is eehh. Sorry.

Thanks I appreciate it

Lollita:3 Lollita:3
9/2/15