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You know what emotion I find most fascinating? Fear. I can see it in the eyes of every person ! look at, I'm a loner, quiet...and I think that makes them even more scared. the fact that they don't know what's going on inside my head. Look it's the little rabbit how cute, trying to run away, but i believe today is the day where I finally fulfill my word and attack.
"Hello Gerard."
"Oh h-hey."
"Come here!" I said and dragged him to the nearest bathroom.
"Oh dear God!"
"No god, just me." I grinned at his continuously growing fear. I threw my first punch and he groaned.

Notes

Myeh there you go I'll update soon. So enjoy, comment, and take care my lovelies.

Comments

@JesusofBaltimore
Thanks so much, I was trying to achieve the "diary" feel, without it actually being a diary. I really appreciate how thoroughly you explained what you liked about my story. Twas very constructive and reassuring.

Lollita:3 Lollita:3
1/10/16

I actually really like the way this has been written! I like the impersonal-ness of frank that really does capture the nature of a sociopath (Which, I may add, you're doing great at). I love the really short chapters... makes it seem more like a running commentary or diary sort of thing! I can't wait to read more!

@AnonymousNarwhal
Thank-you for your honesty, but I would like some clarification please.

Lollita:3 Lollita:3
11/8/15

Too fast... This is umm okay. Sorry. I find it interesting that Frank is a sociopath but the way the story is made is eehh. Sorry.

Thanks I appreciate it

Lollita:3 Lollita:3
9/2/15