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Numb

Summary

Frank is a sociopath and in high school, come stalk his life as he goes through these stressful times.



Chapters

  1. 1

    Hi I'm Frank

  2. 2

    Ahh School, my favorite

  3. 3

    "I-I'm Gerard"

  4. 4

    The Big Bad Wolf

  5. 5

    Fear. Life's true mystery

  6. 6

    Like father, like son, unlike brother

  7. 7

    Questions, questions, and more questions

  8. 8

    Socialization.

Comments

@JesusofBaltimore
Thanks so much, I was trying to achieve the "diary" feel, without it actually being a diary. I really appreciate how thoroughly you explained what you liked about my story. Twas very constructive and reassuring.

Lollita:3 Lollita:3
1/10/16

I actually really like the way this has been written! I like the impersonal-ness of frank that really does capture the nature of a sociopath (Which, I may add, you're doing great at). I love the really short chapters... makes it seem more like a running commentary or diary sort of thing! I can't wait to read more!

JesusofBaltimore JesusofBaltimore
1/9/16

@AnonymousNarwhal
Thank-you for your honesty, but I would like some clarification please.

Lollita:3 Lollita:3
11/8/15

Too fast... This is umm okay. Sorry. I find it interesting that Frank is a sociopath but the way the story is made is eehh. Sorry.

AnonymousNarwhal AnonymousNarwhal
11/7/15

Thanks I appreciate it

Lollita:3 Lollita:3
9/2/15
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