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Runaway Bride

Summary

Gerard loves Frank. Frank loves Gerard. Frank runs away with Gerard. Frank and Gerard try to live their lives as runaway teenagers in the most dangerous part of New Jersey.

FRERARD AU
Warning: References to drugs, alcohol, and sexuality. Not intended for younger readers.

Characters

Frank Iero

Frank Iero

Gerard's boyfriend. Narrator.

Gerard Way

Gerard Way

Frank's geeky little boyfriend

Lindsey Ballato

Lindsey Ballato

Orphaned teen living homeless in Belleville.

Mitch Lucker

Mitch Lucker

Lindsey's younger cousin, also homeless.

Chapters

Comments

@MyFreelanceRomance
Of course! I'd never be rude like that it does no good for anyone and it's mean. I want to help people improve not be an asshole. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter :D

AlwaysFrerard AlwaysFrerard
10/23/14

@AlwaysFrerard
I'm also very grateful that you said that in a nice way. I'm used to people either saying 'yeah, it's good' or 'this is pure shit'. Most of the time there's no in between, so I have a lot of respect for your suggestions and your wording.

So thank you!

MyFreelanceRomance MyFreelanceRomance
10/22/14

@AlwaysFrerard, I did notice that, but by then the story was already up, and at the time I didn't really have it in me to fix it. Will get to it ASAP.

MyFreelanceRomance MyFreelanceRomance
10/22/14

This is good so far!

Only things I noticed were some odd wording. In the beginning where you say "how dangerous this is to do" you should have "how dangerous IT is to do"

I'd also suggest putting breaks between your paragraphs just because it's easier to read.

Keep up the good work!

AlwaysFrerard AlwaysFrerard
10/22/14

I REALLY like this!!!!!!!!

Frerardified Frerardified
10/21/14
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