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Unpublished

Just a dick move

Lyn-z’s POV
So it was official the boy’s had formed a band, and Gerard was the lead singer. He worked diligently at writing new music, and improving his voice, to perform their first gig.
He was happy, therefore I was too, cliché, I know, but what does it matter?
“I miss you,” I pulled at his jacket before our last period of the day.
“I’m sorry baby,” he smirked and kissed my forehead, “you know your patience means a lot to me.”
“Still,” I rose to my toes to kiss his lips, to my disappointment he pulled away as the minute bell rang.
“Lyn it’s time to go.”
“Oh fine,” I skipped up the stairs to get to class.
Jamia’s POV
Frank was distant, he was so obsessed with this band, he never spent much time with me anymore, and he sure liked to talk about Gerard.
“Frank,” I played with his hand, “You’d never leave me for a guy would you?”
“Of course not baby, that’s just a dick move.”

Notes

short and to the point.
co...mment. :D

Comments

I fucking love this so fucking much.
I love how you added real interviews, and real events, and dates,
and ugh, I just fucking love this so fucking much,
I spent my whole day reading this.
You made it sound like it is in fact what happened, if not somewhat close to what actually happen.
---sorry for the weridness, I just freaking love this.
MsCorrupterSOH MsCorrupterSOH
6/25/13
I just used up my entire day to read this entire story because its just so awesome :D
I really wish you could make a sequel (or maybe a short-story/epilogue type of thing?) I would love to see what happened with Lynz and Jamia. Oh, and also, I didn't get the ending. Are Gee and Frank together or not? Did they even get back together after trying to rebuild their friendship? Amazing story, I really loved the ending~
-xoxo Dani
@Hollow Point Smile
Thank you so much :3
jkjames jkjames
10/29/12
@jkjames

Haha :3 no worries! I love me some good mcr fics and this one is deffinaltey up there ^.^
@Hollow Point Smile
WOW. WOW. WOW. WOW. WOW. WOW.
that was so fast. thank you so much! So many people are commenting that they like it and it's making me wanna leap off the computer and go hide away in my room and write. Thank you so much. I really hope I don't disapoint you and i really hope you keep reading! I'd love to hear more feedback from all these undercover fans! thank you so much.


@Hollow Point Smile
jkjames jkjames
10/29/12