7 - Comments

@SaskiaK
Aw, thank you so much.

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Yeah, I think that comments (whether they are positive/have constructive criticism) are inspiring and they can really motivate you to write and keep a story going.

Thank you very much and I'm really glad that you enjoyed. :) x

@SaskiaK
Aw, thank you so much.

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Yeah, I think that comments (whether they are positive/have constructive criticism) are inspiring and they can really motivate you to write and keep a story going.

Thank you you very and I'm really glad that you enjoyed. :) x

What a wonderful ending! It was really sweet and funny too. I really enjoyed this story - weird and wonderful! :D
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You're right about losing heart when no one makes a comment. I don't think people understand how inspiring it can be to an author to receive comments. I've been getting some lovely comments from someone on The Collector and I think I've written 3 chapters in a week! :P

Anyway fab story! You're a very talented author!
Sas xx

@SaskiaK

Yep, I agree. I think that sometimes when you write you kinda go through good patches and bad when writing. My mind had been kinda blank the last few weeks and I've read back through a few chapters before I posted them and been like, is this even good enough? And felt like giving up, but knowing that someone actually reads and doesn't hate it almost makes you want to carry on writing, which I suppose is a good thing. :)

and hopefully this story should come to a gentle end with both of them being safe and happy, but I can't bring myself to say that they will never see each other again.

Thank you so much for everything. And I do hope that the ending will be good. :) x

Your note pretty much said it all. I don't think people realise how important comments are. They can be really inspiring. Everything from "I enjoyed that chapter" to comments on the action and emotions as if it were really happening make an author want to continue. Yes, we write for our own amusement, but if we didn't want to see what others thought or merely to entertain, we wouldn't post them. They do make such a difference.

And on that note, the actual comment! :)
A nice gentle chapter so we can get our breath back from all the heart-in-mouth action! I'm happy for JJ and Mikey, they both have family and they know Vince and his brother are both locked up for good. Nobody seems to be going after Mikey for the other murders he didn't even know about so it all looks good. Except they're going to be on opposite sides of the world. After everything they've been through, it's heartbreaking! I hope everything works out for them, it seems only fair after what they've both suffered.

Great chapter!! Will be sad to see it end, but I'm sure it'll be a great ending.
Sas xx

@SaskiaK
Yep! Crazy Mikey! I was thinking of doing something similar to that where he escaped the hospital and that but I couldn't bring myself to write it after all that he'd been through.
Thank you very much and very happy face now. :D x

Wow! Crazy Mikey! :P I had a horrible feeling he was about to run out of the hospital and try to get himself run over, when all the while his family was okay! Oh dear, though, Vince's brother? I hope he's not going to do anything :S

Great update! Glad they're okay! No sad face! :D

Sas xx

@SaskiaK
Ah! All should be explained in the next chapter which will be up pretty soon. And no, pls don't be sad! :(

Noooo! How did Vince find them? You can't kill them, that's so unfair :( (Sad face, see. You don't want me to have a sad face do you?) :P
Great update!
Sas xo

@SaskiaK
Thank you very much. :) x

Haha! Poor Mikey- thrown over his shoulder! I do hope Vince is lying but somehow I feel he probably isn't, and that's heartbreaking. Can't wait to see where this goes next. Great chapter! Sas xx

@SaskiaK
I know, although Mikey does want to go and join his family so they're both a bit stuck now.
Thanks so much. :) x

Poor Mikey!! The memories were lovely and heartbreaking at the same time. I wouldn't want to be Vince right now - when Mikey sees him, he might just kill him! After all, he was supposed to! ;) Great update! Sas xx

@SaskiaK
Thank you very much, and Mikey really could need that knife in this situation. Next update should be soon too. Oh! I didn't think about wether JJ stabbed him as well: plot twist! I must answer that question pretty soon. Thank you for reading. :) x

Hehe! Poor Mikey! I must admit, I did think it was odd him agreeing to swap out someone's pills in the last one and I ended up googling it but I didn't make the connection. Hmm, Vince at the door eh? Sounds like Mikey might need that knife after all? But if there were six if them, Mikey was stabbed 7 times. Now, was the stab to his leg just to stop him, then they all stabbed him once? Or did JJ also stab him? Is he not safe from him either?? Great chapter!! Sas xx

@SaskiaK
Ah, so many questions need to be answered! And at the moment JJ doesn't know that Mikey failed the first task.... Haha, me too, and thank you very much :) x

Wow! I seriously doubt he can do it, especially now he's got to know JJ. But will he be killed if he doesn't? And does JJ know he didn't manage the first task either? How can all these bizarre tasks save him?? And weirdly, I'm starting to recognise letters in Morse Code now! I can't even begin to guess where this is leading! Sas xx

@SaskiaK
Oh sorry, the next chapter should be up in a few mins. And thank you very much for your support and for reading. :) I hope you enjoy. :) x

Hiya! Will you please stop apologising and running yourself down! I doubt anyone expects an update at regular intervals and this chapter was intriguing - .... . .-. . .----. ... / .- -.-. - ..- .- .-.. .-.. -.-- / --.- ..- .. - . / .- / .-.. --- - / --- ..-. / -.. .-. .- -- .- / .. -. / - .... .. ... / -.-. .... .- .--. - . .-. --..-- / .- -. -.. / .. / .-.. --- ...- . -.. / .. - #

I'm really looking forward to the next one though - but in your own time!
sas xx

@SaskiaK
Hey it's okay, don't worry about it. :) I hope you are feeling less tired now though, and pls don't have any nightmares like Mikey. Thank you very much for reading, I'm glad you like. :) x