The Storm - Comments, page 10

Great chapter, and thanks for suggesting looking up Nesho Falls, I saw heaps of photos and found an article about the town, what an interesting place, so odd to see a ghost town look so modern, you usually picture (as I did) an old west type town

Great, I love this!

Gosh there is so much to Lucy we are only just finding out about, and how about the paper just being there in the car wreck without the duffel, and Rex finding it! Spoooky!!

Oh my, I effing love this! Cheers Missus, can't wait for more! xo

Oh, wow, I think Lucinda is amazing. Great character.

Oh I love it! I knew there had to be a strong connection between the house and this place

OMFG I swear I did not copy the coment before me by MCRMom AGAIN! I effing swear! It just IS getting better and better! How fuckin freaky! More soon xo

This is getting better and better! More soon! xo

This is getting better and better. Love it!

I love how you weave what seem to be unrelated thigns together, he certainy is being led toward something

OK so I repeated mcrmom, didn't mean to. I really am loving this! xo

Oooh I am loving this!! xo

Oh I am loving this. Keep it up!

Oh wow, that's so amazing. The mystery 'man' and now the storm and finding the town, billiant

I'm loving this! Can't wait for more. xo

Whoa! This is so cool.

Poor Mikey, but I'm glad G is relaxing

Sorry, late to comment, been on holiday, very limited internet! Love this!! More soon pretty please xo

This is great.

Oh dear. You can feel his disgust and shame at himself.