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The Storm - Comments, page 8
Wow, that was... Wow.
Really, this story is one of the most exciting ones that I have ever read, thrilling and very well written. When I read the first chapters with the messages in spanish I was so excited because, pls, I'm spanish and I could understand what she said (btw, excuse my grammar mistakes). Oh, and the way the plot depelops, I mean, how long will he be able to mantain his story 'hidden'? Are they gonna find him? Awww... I can't wait for the next chapter! But I hope you have a nice holiday :3
Really, this story is one of the most exciting ones that I have ever read, thrilling and very well written. When I read the first chapters with the messages in spanish I was so excited because, pls, I'm spanish and I could understand what she said (btw, excuse my grammar mistakes). Oh, and the way the plot depelops, I mean, how long will he be able to mantain his story 'hidden'? Are they gonna find him? Awww... I can't wait for the next chapter! But I hope you have a nice holiday :3
Forget the story? I could never forget it! Like you wrote Lucy saying, I feel like I'm part of their lives, like I'm in the story too.
Amazing how she didn't recognise his name, gives him more time but he's going to have to tell her soon, it'll catch up to him and then it might be too late to explain. :(
Have a fantastic holiday, I bet you'll have a wonderful time and maybe find some new interesting places and inspiration for another story :)
Amazing how she didn't recognise his name, gives him more time but he's going to have to tell her soon, it'll catch up to him and then it might be too late to explain. :(
Have a fantastic holiday, I bet you'll have a wonderful time and maybe find some new interesting places and inspiration for another story :)
Oh fuck! Another wow from me also!!
Just to let you know I am off on holiday for a week so I will catch up on chapters when I get back. Take care xo
Just to let you know I am off on holiday for a week so I will catch up on chapters when I get back. Take care xo
oh I want her to tell him what's happened so much, and what the hell is Karli saying! The storm sure doesn't seem to be far away
yay an update before my bedtime! Hot hot hot!!! But damn, now I have to wait again until the next one.
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Hope you are having a lovely holiday! I had a great week away, I must admit I was kind of disappointed I didn't come back to 3 chapters! But I'll let you off, haha!
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8/4/13