You should have never come - Comments, page 24

Love it! But the next chapter is making me excited! ^u^

I can not wait for the next chapter!!!

@Pink_Elfie
Yeah i hate the use of that word too, i have no idea how it got there tbh

@gerard_needs_to_chill
Thank you, I knew you'd understand!

@Pink_Elfie
Did I really say that? I always try to avoid those kind of things because i know how offensive they can be... thank you, im going to change it

Although I love the story, in chapter five you used the word "retarded" as an adjective to describe words. I would never ever make a fuss but its just that that word is offensive, would you mind changing it?

please update poor gee oh and just think about frank crawling oooooOo

OH MY FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF please update.

Update, please? The sooner the better.xxx

Please please PLEASE update tonight if you have time, it's amazing and I can't wait

^u^ your favorite chapter is next? •U• I'm excited!
and oh my god I love this!

I squeal everytime this updates. It's fucking perfect!

@Frerardified
I love yours more, trust meh, they're amazinggggg *doesn't know how to express happiness online* :3

@gerard_needs_to_chill
^u^ aww, well I LOVE your books!!!!!!! SO MUCH!

@Frerardified
You can't imagine how much i love reading your comments and i dont even know why ^.^ (happens)

Oh Gerard is such a drama queen.

I'm so pumped for gee and Frank to make contact and smuttttttt

Man this is brillaint! Can't wait for the next update. :)

This is so good! ^u^

Update, update, update. Pllleeeaaassseee.xxx