Runaway Bride - Comments

@MyFreelanceRomance
Of course! I'd never be rude like that it does no good for anyone and it's mean. I want to help people improve not be an asshole. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter :D

@AlwaysFrerard
I'm also very grateful that you said that in a nice way. I'm used to people either saying 'yeah, it's good' or 'this is pure shit'. Most of the time there's no in between, so I have a lot of respect for your suggestions and your wording.

So thank you!

@AlwaysFrerard, I did notice that, but by then the story was already up, and at the time I didn't really have it in me to fix it. Will get to it ASAP.

This is good so far!

Only things I noticed were some odd wording. In the beginning where you say "how dangerous this is to do" you should have "how dangerous IT is to do"

I'd also suggest putting breaks between your paragraphs just because it's easier to read.

Keep up the good work!

I REALLY like this!!!!!!!!

I NEED this in my life!! You have to carry on... :D