Bondage Mansion - Comments, page 5

Only 3? Shit, will they're be a sequal? This story is so good!

@Icantstaystronganymore
There not bad thought processes. I know that number three sounds really awesome, but only three more chapters till you find out, ^-^

Thank you for reading and commenintg. ^-^

@Icantstaystronganymore
There not bad thought processes. I know that number three sounds really awesome, but only three more chapters till you find out, ^-^

Thank you for reading and commenintg. ^-^

@Icantstaystronganymore
There not bad thought processes. I know that number three sounds really awesome, but only three more chapters till you find out, ^-^

Thank you for reading and commenintg. ^-^

@Icantstaystronganymore
There not bad thought processes. I know that number three sounds really awesome, but only three more chapters till you find out, ^-^

Thank you for reading and commenintg. ^-^

@Icantstaystronganymore
There not bad thought processes. I know that number three sounds really awesome, but only three more chapters till you find out, ^-^

Thank you for reading and commenintg. ^-^

I have 3 predictions of how this story will end: (don't laugh at me if they're really bad or not close at all, haha) :)

1. Gee picks frank
2. Gee picks Robert because he thinks it's the right thing to do but after franks gone he'll get that itch or start having withdrawals and he will somehow get frank to come back
3. He gets really pressured when he has to choose and ends up with both, and frank and Robert make some kind of agreement.

Idek, these are just different things I've thought of. Lol, I'm sorry for the terrible predictions c:

@Sharpest_Life_Supb
Oh no! I have one more Operation to go.

@momiji_neyuki
oh yay. I thought Cool Devices was finished. Woo Hoo!

@Sharpest_Life_Supb
I completely understand. After I put up this chapter of Cool Devices I will put up the next chapter on Bondage. ^-^

@momiji_neyuki
I'll check it out. im trying to get to my writing and housework as well but my wrist hurts. so until i find my Dragon Speaking software, im procrastinating/resting. ;) Always a pleasure.

@Sharpest_Life_Supb
AU is alternate universe where there is no reality that we know aka the band.

Band!fic would be a story about the guys in real life. They are in the band, the wives, the kids, the whole nine yards. Some are alright and some are...well yeah. @~@

My fav is a series called the Oversexed AU. You have to deal with Pedicone being there, I skip over those parts, but it is the best one because everything is completely consensual and the whole band, including wives, are in a poly relationship. That is how I would like to believe everything turned out if it was true so no cheating was involved. ^-^

I have a lot more on AO3 then I do here. I just like the format better. ^-^

@momiji_neyuki
That makes a lot of sense. I havent been on the other sites yet although ive meant to. Im not familiar w/ AUs or Band!fic. What are those?

@Icantstaystronganymore
I can't promise that it won't happen, but I can tell you that it will not be what you think. I would never want to hurt my readers ever, but i did say from the beginning that this story had an arc that I would not deviate from. As long as one understands this, they will be fine.

Think of it this Way. My original readers had to wait for the final chapter of the fic, not including the epilogue I decided to write a year later, for two weeks. you guys will get it the next day or maybe even the same day. ^-^

Thank you for reading and commenting. ^-^

I was honestly expecting you to rip off the bandages on my feelings but you didn't and that makes me really happy, okay. Great chapter:) My feelings are healing nicely but I'm expecting emotional damage within the next few chapters.

@Sharpest_Life_Supb
I will always answer back to any comment, even the annoying update please ones. I really hate those. Thank you for that amazing compliment by the Way. ^-^

Believe it or not I learned my writing skills from two places. One was The Dove Keeper. The descriptive way that she wrote told you what Gerard's apartment looked like so well that you could easily picture it in your mind. I strive for that in my writing too. The other was a writer named Innocent_Wolves from Live Journal and AO3. She gave me my invitation on AO3 and encouraged me to write my first fic. My first one was the only band!fic i ever wrote. After that I stuck with AUs only. I like to distance from the guys as much as I can. It makes me more comfortable in my writing. I also use very little canon other than hair styles, body styles, and well known personality's, ie: fear of needles, being an artist, like that.

So for your first paragraph, you described both Gerard and I perfectly. That is the part of myself that I instilled in Gerard. Being and people pleaser and taking care of others. You were correct on all fronts of this. ^-^

Yes! So true. I lack self esteem and lacked (mostly) choice then, now idk. The funny thing about his will, if I'm reading it right, almost waxes and wanes. Mine has always been like that too. It's the ppl pleaser mentality but also the need to stay strong to take care others. It seems like he has given up, but then he doesn't. But it's never for himself. Is that right? I always survived to care for younger sibs.

I've been pretty much reading as much as possible on this site for about 2 weeks, so I've had a chance to read many different writers. There are a number who are quite good. But rly, you are by far the best I've found. I'm not just saying that. You are amazing. :) I appreciate your comments on my comments. Haha That seems funny but whatever. I'm still saying it.

@Sharpest_Life_Supb
Speaking of someone in a lifestyle like Gerard, not without my own rights of course, when you choose to give up that much control, it can be a scary thing. This day and age we have rights as "slaves" and subs. I do put some of my own situations in the story, but without choices like I had.

Being used by choice it fine, but Gerard obviously has no choice so you are right, it is very unfair. The only thing that keeps him going, and you will see this as the story progresses, it that he has a strong will and self-esteem, two things that I sorly lack.

Also, when everyone wants something from you like they all seem to want from Gee, it's a lonely thing. It's a selfish kind of want even if they think they are not just pleasing themselves. Although I wouldn't begin to say I ever had the kind of charisma or beauty that Gee has here..... from ages 14-21 (and intermittently after), I've been in a position where I can relate. When you're treated like an object, or even told you're seen something you're not, it's short circuiting to the brain. Esp if it's family members who lust after u. Makes you feel disgusting like you did something to bring all this on yourself. Poor Gee.

@Sharpest_Life_Supb
As you should be unsettled. This mess is far from over. Now nothing is a mystery anymore and it will be interesting to see you guys react to how Bert and Frank are now with Gee.

Thank you for reading and commenting. ^-^