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You Know What They Do To Guys Like Us In Prison - Comments, page 10
@Hazel_Highlight
At this point as long their is no big changes in how the story is going until the end. I would day the third person is a good idea for slipping in the ideas and characters you want. As well as the povs you want.
@Ishipfrerardsoharditsunreal
Your username cracks me up xD
hmm.. If We can find a way to slip in Kellins perspective on the confrontation without changing POV's would be perfect. The idea of a POV change in the middle of a chapter unsettles me a little bit.
I do want to do a Mikey POV, I really do, we both do. But I can't right this very second, I want to wait another chapter or two because I have a tendency to ruin my stories with back-to-back-to-back plot twists and I don't know I feel like it's too early. It's a great idea but we're gonna wait for the chapter after this next one. What other characters would you like to see in the story? We need to add more for the ending :P
Do a Mikey POV and what happens when they take him away. You can have the second character added in then. You could do a third POV and have it so it starts to hint at those ideas and get into Gerard's head a little at Frank and vs versa.
Oh there's another idea. Like a flashback or dream or something that digs deeper into Kellin and Gerard's background with knowing each other. I'll add that idea to the cry for help
Absolutely amazingly interesting. There is no possible way I could get bored with this. The characters backgrounds, personalities, dialogue, everything all work and fit perfectly together.
Mikey's gonna get raped and it's gees fault and OMG frank cut off his dads dick? Now ray knows what he did cx
@Chipsahoy!!!
Ahh! I'm so glad you love it! You guys have no idea how much I love hearing from you guys. I'll start working on the update tomorrow(: and oh no please keep blabbing, I love it xD
Holy shit this is good! I am really into this story! I really love how this story builds up and isn't like any other story I've read so far. (I mean this in a good way.) This is an amazing cliffhanger. I love how I can feel the guilt Gerard has, how nonchalant Frank is, and how naïve Mickey is. I'm sorry I shouldn't keep blabbing about this story but its really interesting and I cant wait for the next update! :3
@MCR_ShatteredHeart
Thank you for understanding, and I'm so glad you like it(: and you may be right... (;
@Hazel_Highlight
Hey I think this is a really great story, I love how it's not just boom prison bitch gets screwed literally. It's building up and up, I think Bobs going to do something and of course what others want the Frerard. Me? I'm liking the intense and emotional drama myself, amazing can't wait for te next update.
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@Blood Splatter-Killjoy
Like a third person POV? That's a good idea, I'll keep that in mind(: I think I might merge a few ideas. Kellin POV, with an insight on his and Gerard's past, frank can tell him practically everything that just happened, and Kellin can recognize the obvious symptoms of withdrawal of Gerard, followed by the beginning of the confrontation. Sound good, maybe?
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