Humans Shall Never Harm You - Comments, page 2

@Hazel_Highlight
my teacher's actually pretty cool XD only restriction is school appropriate and 8-10 pages in length (typed)

Short story: FRERARD ONE SHOT X'D omg no you'd probably be expelled. But does ur short story have to be a specific topic?

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Do a quick fluffy or dark one shot. Message me with guild lines and I will help you the best I can.

Fuck yeah Frank kick those doms asses

Awwwwwwweeeeeeeee!!!!!!! So cute!!!(:

this is awesome i love it

I love what you did with what we discussed.

this is really good please continue this is my third time subscribing to this story the first time was the original but i was confused with it and just kinda gave up but when i saw it was started over i really liked the new plot but when she gave up on the story i was actually really disapponted because it wouldnt be a original but this is really good

I thought the bullying bit was fine. I really like what you've done with this.

Might want to watch the wording of dialogue. Kinda is slang for kind of but they would say in a way. If you need help editing your chapters I would be happy to help. A few time errors can be found but nothing major.

@imakilljoywannabe
I'll let you know when it's up! :)

@TwistedKnife
Blood Splatter mentioned a second person! Now I know who! :D I'll be sure to check yours out too!

I'm excited for this. I loved the original. Also thought I should let you know I'm doing a story kind of based off Humans with Blood Splatter' s permission. So I'm not stealing or anything.

I can't wait to see what you do with this