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@Sharpest_Life_Supb
Oh! My apologies. I thought I had mentioned in the story- Ray's a fertile! Not a dom >.<<br>
This is probably weird but heres what has been driving me crazy. Each time they talk about the Doms bad behavior or future punishment, I think, except Ray! You forgot to tell them about Ray. Dont let him take the fall too. Just me? But I love it. The changes are nice too.
@imakilljoywannabe
I'm sorry, really didn't mean to push! I forget sometimes that not everyone has as much free time as me! Just when you're ready, know I'll always be here waiting! :) Xx
@GeesGirl!
I'm really sorry this is taking so long, I'm finishing school these last few weeks and I'm focusing on that right now; I haven't had the time to write. This is my first time on here in at least a week. I have finals next week, but that also means I have half days. So I'm hoping I'll get some writing time in there soon.
I don't like to beg, but please please, PLEASE update? I've resorted to using my imagination to try to finish this, but I know you'd do a MUCH better job, you're a fab writer! Please update? Ok, I'll stop begging now! Please? : ) Xx
You HAVE to update this! I'm not usually a fan of vampire stories, but I love this one already, I like Gee as the fertile, most stories have it the other way round! Please update? ;). Xx
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i need to stop screaming my mom has already made a stupid group meeting with other girls for me to make friends
@imakilljoywannabe
yes they were my sister came running in only to find me jumping up and down fangirling like an idiot my dad is now positive that i need more friends
Okay so I'm thinking write a story about complaining to write a story or um a horror themed zombie musical. I am no help at all. You're talking to the person who literally just wrote a story so I could use the phrase menacing jazz hands once in it...
Why not do a GerardxOC OR FrankxOC or a Frerard? You could do the typical high school experience, and add the paranormal like vamps or something, or do a kidnapping or... I dunno >.> oh oh oh what if Helena was Gerard's old girlfriend that died, and it kind of pushed him to a psychotic break and now he sees and hears her everywhere he goes, but when he meets another girl and gets close to her, "Helena" gets all jealous and Gerard's just like freaking out mentally... I don't know I'm trying to think of shit real quick it's midnight xD
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oh, why did i think he was a dom? haha I guess i was filling in my own blanks. Must have rly needed a nap. Great so far. Cant wait to see what you do next.
10/23/14