Very Much Alive - Comments, page 5

I'm beyond excited

You devil.
You're dragging this out on purpose, aren't you?
You're as much of a tease as Gerard. -___-
Love it though, lol.

HOLY SHIT THE CLIFFHANGER NO OMG

OMF WHY YOU MAKE CLIFFHANGER! WHYYYYYY

WEEKEND PANCAKE REPORT! WEEKEND PANCAKE REPORT! God that was awesome when he did that and also genius idea of incorperating that into the story. Can't wait for the next update but I understand the wait. :)

WHAT KIND OF GAME IS THIS.
WHAT.
NO.
THIS CLIFFHANGER I JUST.
FFFFUFJCK

Oh my god! Is Gee gonna be naked? That would be THE ultimate tease!

GERARD'S GOT FRANKIE'S ATTENTION. STUFF IS GOING TO HAPPEN

Sour dough pancakes made every Sunday for 40 years.

This makes WPR even better now.
I'm making pancakes in celebration. This is so awesome.

I loved this especially when you were describing Frank's worried about experience seriously perfect

And the spooning is perfection.

You're seriously a very talented writer. Your description is beautiful. Your character description is wonderful. And your speech, comedy and humour is really funny! The Rocky Horror scene sent me into a fit of laughter, just imagining i
it. Your boner references too, omg!

@FunGhoul21 @Mindfreakxo Be patient, I promise it'll be here soon!

@DieWithUrMaskOn Thank you! There will be a bit more in the next chapter, and I'll never forget the smut. It's so hard not to write it now (trust me, I want it as bad as you readers) but I'm trying to let the tension grow and make it last. Hehehe

@quixotica @Chemical_30 Thank you! More in the next chapter, glad you're enjoying

I really like your fluff, I'd like more! :) P.s Not forgetting the smut.

Why.
Y u no write frerard sexytime.
We need it.
PLS.

When are they gonna fuck

CUTE CUTE CUTE AHHH

That was a cute chapter haha

oh my... good one at that to