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Only bad girls will get good grades - Comments, page 2
OH MY GOSH whyy I need to know what happens next and now I will be paranoid but i swear just before I go to sleep my mind will be like what if that sink hole from that picture COMES OVER OUR HOUSE IN YOUR SLEEP so thank you and RISSS NOOOOO
@TheDeadKilljoy I REEAAALLLy need to go back and edit them so they are more detailed. On wattpad Im further into the story and the later chapters are WAAYYY more detailed
Its really good so far, I really like how you are writing his story.
One thing that I think you could improve on is maybe making the chapters a bit more detailed or write a bit more for each chapter. Unless you are comfortable with what you're already doing with the story. It's all up to you. Please do not go out of your comfort zone if you do not want to.
Please update soon though, I extremely love it!
@Another_Reckless_Killjoy
Somebody told me
you had a boyfriend
who looked like a girlfriend
that I had in February of last year
@PartyPoisonDemolitionLover
NOW YOU KNOW MY PAAAIIINNNSS OF PARANOIA
6/3/14