Promise You Won't Tell? - Comments, page 2

Well crazy and wacky could be a Mpreg?

@india_way_xox

Thanks. I couldn't remember the word but you helped me out <3

Hey guys <3 I'm looking for ideas on what to put on the next chapter <3 Can't wait to read what your creative minds come up with

@MCRbunny
We understand hun

@RecklessNightmare



@india_way_xox



@Blood Splatter-Killjoy

Tanks for the advice guys :P Sorry I haven't written in awhile...I've been SOOOO busy lately

I like it! But just some advice, try not to start all of you sentences with I, he, we , etc..

BTW its not half gay its bisexual
its an alright story just soreasd it out a bit more and but so gay or straight sex scenes in there !

Ok when writing smut it is best to spread it out. Do a bit a research, use words that are descriptive and I can't say this enough. Details, details, details lots of them! Pant a picture with words

Hey, guys. I know it's not the best but, please spread the word maybe some of your friends will like it :]