I Walk A Fine Line - Comments, page 4

@Adrenaline Roulette
Oh so I'm guessing that means you like this

@Blood Splatter-Killjoy
FUCKING FANTASTIC

@Blood Splatter-Killjoy
FUCKING FANTASTIC

@Adrenaline Roulette
Good?

@Blood Splatter-Killjoy
WOOOOOOWOWOOOO

@Adrenaline Roulette
Working in the next chapter now

@Stitches
Oh ok

@Blood Splatter-Killjoy
I'll have you know, I do not believe in unicorns.
I'm more of a lerprachaun person.

That's not fair, you can't just leave me hanging there like that.

@Stitches
Ok Mikey

@Blood Splatter-Killjoy
Made me smile.

@Stitches
Oh well I've been told my speeches are good

@Blood Splatter-Killjoy
IT"S A GOOD THING
Not everyone can flatter me so.

@Stitches
Oh I'm sorry, I make people cry and blush

Oh, you make me blush.

@Stitches
Ok just send a Pm and i'll get you a email of just ship it off in a Pm

@Blood Splatter-Killjoy
Yeah, I'll edit! Grammar Nazi to the rescue!

@Stitches
Oh I know and that will be put in if nothing else will you edit?

You have some run-on sentences, but not bad.
Gerard is more feminine than any Greek woman will ever be.

@Ninet
Ok I will get the out line for chapter two done and get it written. Glad you like it thanks for the idea, ;)

hey this is great keep 'em coming