The Personal Assistant - COMPLETED - Comments, page 3

omg i want a ray gun!!!!!! :) and i cant wait to see how it ends

I love it...

@funsized

All will be revealed in the last chapter!!! Yay it worked, thats what I was hoping for was creepy!!! Thanks for reading!!! LOVE YA!!!

Oh my god!!!
I was so scared when he kept going into the shadows, I though Gee was gonna die, and that closet thing was creepy as fuck man!
Oh my god!!! Whats gonna happen to Shiloh? She has to be okay, and Mikey, he got stabbed too, is he gonna be okay?

@MCR_ShatteredHeart
Yes I was left shaking

@Blood Splatter-Killjoy

So.......does that mean it was good? Trying to get a feel on how everyone is feeling about the way things turned out.

Woah shaking

@Chemical_30

I cant thank you enough for reading and thank you for the comments. I appreciate so much!!

@MCR_ShatteredHeart
:3 I love it when your happy :DDDD

@One_Of_The_Fabulous_Killjoys

I ABSOLUTELY LOVE YOU!!!!
Okay I see what you mean...........as long as it makes sense on why he is where he is now. Thank you so much love!

Oh my goodness!! This is seriously the best story I've read!

@MCR_ShatteredHeart
No! Don't hate your self please! Just don't you dare hate yourself!! Just don't... And it makes scene why MATT changed because he wants shy back and he thinks she's with gee she he wants to hurt him. So I don't think he changed to fast but if you wanna change it I'm not gonna stand in your way :3 I'll stand by you no matter what choice you make :) I'm always here.....

@One_Of_The_Fabulous_Killjoys

Thanks love!! Like I said in the notes Ive been hating myself and everything I do lately. Im just not sure how you all feel and Im writing for you all. Matt started off as just a simple abusive boyfriend, now hes done all of this. Ive always been one to try and be realistic and I hope thats what I deliver. Really Im just not sure about Matts progress in the story, did I change him too much too fast?

Thanks for commenting by the way!! Its helping me.

@MCR_ShatteredHeart
You didn't let us down it's ok :3 and if you want to change it go ahead it's your choice no one can stop you :) just as long as you happy I'm happy :D

Im going to rewrite this chapter......maybe the last couple. I dont know, I think Matt turned into too much of a psycho. Its not that hes psycho, he started off as just an abusive boyfriend and now this.......

Im sorry everyone, I let you all down but Ill fix it.

@One_Of_The_Fabulous_Killjoys

Sequel Yes!!
The ending is actually exactly how I wanted it to end, I was more concerned with the beginning and middle parts.

@MCR_ShatteredHeart
I think it's fine! It just depends if the chapter works with what you she planned for you last one. Cause if they for then I think you should keep it exactly the way it is :3 and there's gonna be a sequel... YESSSSSSS X3

@One_Of_The_Fabulous_Killjoys

Yes there is still a sequel!!!! I dont joke around about things like that XD
So how did you like the chapter? I was thinking about rewriting it, like I mentioned in the notes.

She's gonna die it's she...... But this story is really good!!!!!! And I can't wait for the last chap.... Is there gonna be a sequel? I'm just asking :p