When You & I Were Forever Wild - Comments, page 2

@give_me_all_your_poison
Well I'm still updating, I've just been super busy so it took me longer to get the last chapter up. I probably will skip ahead at some point though. I have no idea how many chapters I have left...we'll see. Thank you :)

OMG you NEED to continue this. Maybe skip ahead a while yo when they have a family and her mom comes back again or something I don't know but CONTINUE IT! THIS IS PERFECTION

@Lauama
I'm incredibly flattered that this story causes such strong emotions hahaha! Seriously! Thank you - I'm glad you like it so much. I sadly couldn't update this weekend because I've been away. But SOON! I hope you continue to enjoy it :)))

just got to chapter 28 and your notes made my day I LOVE YOU SO MUCH RIGHT NOW I COULD DIE

ok so i'm reading your fic all at once and 1) you're brilliant and you make me cry 2) this is the most hopelessly romantic thing and 3) I have just finished chapter 19 and I want to smash your head into a wall I love you ok bye

@Killjoy-partypoison
I'm sure you'll do a great job. And like I said, you can always send me the draft to look at before you post it :)

Thank you so much for your help! At first I was worried that it would turn out like shit, but after your little smut lesson, I now have a better understanding of what I (think) I am doing. Hopefully it won't be a fail

@Gossipslothxoxo
:))))

@Killjoy-partypoison
I feel really flattered and I honestly don't have a problem with it but I think, since it's YOUR story, you should write it yourself. I'm not familiar with your writing style, story and your characters, I don't know what they *feel* and *think*, only you do. So that wouldn't work. You should just try. I know it's a challenge if you've never written it before but that's what you do when you're creating something. Personally, I think the worst thing you can do when writing smut is think too much about what sounds 'hot' or to make it as graphic as you can. Don't rush it either. Describe as much as you can but not only the act itself but also the characters' feelings and thoughts. What does he/she feel, what physical and emotional reaction does it cause when he/she does a certain thing. Just think about what you would enjoy reading. If you want, you can send me your drafts in a PM and I can have a look at what you got and help you out with suggestions.

Hey! Is it possible that you can write me a smut scene for my story? I have no idea how to write one and yours are incredible! If you don't want to I completely understand and it won't be a problem.

yes to babies! @the_girl

@alandofunicornsandmikey
That's so cool :) Sorry I didn't stop there for longer haha

Oh my god, I'm from El Paso! And Finn+Gerard babies are a yes :)

@seventeen way
Why thank you :) I shall start working on these Finn & Gerard babies soon

Omg yes little Finn babies

plus u make good smut :)

@shizzlenannigans
haha love it! thank you sweetie <3

The award is: Best (Attempt) At Comforting During And After A Drug-Related Comedown

I'm thinking the awards might be a bit long-winded.
But seriously you're one of my favourite fanfic writers and everything you do is a lil bit perfect <3

@Gossipslothxoxo
Thank you dear! Always glad to share the story (and the smut hehe)

To all my wonderful readers - I'm sorry there was no update this weekend. I'm currently traveling and visiting relatives so I haven't been able to write at all. I hope I can finish another chapter soon.

<3

Duuuuude this is brill, always love how you write but this time I had to speak up, and not just because of the amount of smut ;D Love the story, LOVE the chapter, you go friend!

@shizzlenannigans
are you gonna go back and give awards to all the previous chapters too? haha jk that would mean you'd have to read it all again. I'm glad you liked my drug-related smut ;) thank you