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Asdgjkljgdahdkdlajdjal im so happy that you posted a new chapter!!!!!! And it was perfect too! I can't wait for more!!!!!!!!!!
@shizzlenannigans
haha THANK YOU! Personally, I don't believe in marriage but Finn and Gerard were meant to get married. And now they'll have an epic honeymoon!
This is amazing and smut is ahhhhhh so much love and if I eer get married which I probably won't because I'm scared of commitment you can't back out of but if I ever have a not marriage and get not married in a kind of let's do ever thing you would do if you get married with rings and shit but without the formal ceremony I'm totally going on a us ROADTRIP. Thank you for the more story and the idea ;)
@Demolition Reptarr
@Killjoy-partypoison
Don't be stealing my ideas
....I already started on the new chapter anyway :P
@mickenz96
Thank you :) Although I wouldn't go as far as saying that I make a change in the world. And I doubt that Gerard would be proud of me for writing fan fiction about him lol let's be real! It's what I like to do and he happens to be an inspiration. I mostly write for myself and I write the way I like it and if other people happen to read it and like it too, then that's amazing! But I don't see it as something 'special' and I'm glad I don't because otherwise I would become arrogant about it.
I don't use tumblr or twitter but thank you for the offer :) Same, if you ever wanna chat, feel free to message me on here or just comment. I'm glad you like the ending too...and I *think* I'll have a new chapter ready soon!
@the_girl
(just finished and i am dead. literally. dead. and also I won't get bored of this story especially if there are polar bears and avengers ;) it was such a perfect story and im keeping my subscription active for absolutely ever <3)
@Killjoy-partypoison
I DON'T KNOW WHAT TO SAY ANYMORE! Except THANK YOU a million times! Knowing that I made you feel what the characters were feeling is the biggest compliment and achievement ever! Because that's all I ever wanted! I really don't see myself as talented whatsoever but I'm SO HAPPY that you loved the story so much....and I promise I will try my best to maybe continue it! I've already started with a new chapter...if by the end of it I'm happy with it, I will post it for sure and then go from there :)
The idea with the island is good because island=beach=hot climate=half-naked Gerard=half-naked Finn=lots of sexy time
Conspiracy theory: Linus the cat was actually Benjamin Linus all along ;)
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE POST MORE CHAPTERS! I HAVE NO IDEA HOW TO LIVE WITHOUT THIS STORY! I really do like the idea of them crashing on an island oHMAYBE the can coincidentally board the same flight as Lauren and ray who are married and then the plane crashes and gee, Finn, Ray, Lauren, and a couple other people survive on a stranded island. PLOT TWIST
THAT WAS HONESTLY PERFECT! IF I WHERE TO FIND MY OWN DEFINITION OF PERFECT THIS WOULD COME UP! HOLY SHIT I CANT EVEN! I- THIS IS MY FAVORITE STORY EVER AND IT JUST GOT BETTER! HOW ARE YOU SO TALENTED I CANT EVEN EXPLAIN IT IN WORDS! AND IF YOU THINK IN JOKING THEN THAT IS WRONG BECAUSE THIS IS PERFECT AND I DIDENT KNOW I COULD CRY THIS MUCH OVER A STORY AND OH MY GOD! ASDFHJKL I CANT EVEN EXPLAIN WHAT IM FEELING RIGHT NOW BUT IF I HAD YOUR TALENT THEN MAYBE I COULD BE ABLE TO BECAUSE YOU CAN MAKE EVERYONE FEEL WHAT THE CHARACTERS ARE FEELING AND I DONT EVEN KNOW HOW TO EXPLAIN MY OWN SELF! LIKE SERIOUSLY HOW DOES ONE BECOME AS TALENTED AS YOU!?!?
YOU GUYS ARE KILLING ME! (Also btw, all those idea were jokes lol although I would love to kill Finn's bitch mother, I don't want them to go to jail) I actually have an idea for a sequel...but I have to write at least a few chapters first to see if it's working. I have decided to add the chapters here though, I don't wanna make a separate story.
@shizzlenannigans
Thank you so much for not only reading but also letting me know your thoughts and feelings. I definitely wanted to write more sex but I also didn't want to write it just for the sake of having more smut in the story. You know, it should still go with the storyline. That's why I didn't make that make-up sex thing a full on smut because hey, the point of this is that they're reuniting after 10 years and what that means and not a hot sex scene. (Although I do feel like writing more hot sex scenes...they do have to make up for lost time, right??) SIGH I'm just in love with Finn and Gerard. I want them to go on more fun adventures now that they're together again!
@alandofunicornsandmikey
Thank youuuu for reading and commenting and sharing your thoughts! This being your favorite story is a HUGE honor! Especially considering that most people here prefer to write and read Frerard and I always feel like non-Frerard stories are a bit of a rarity here so it means even more to me that you say that! And I was laughing, crying, sobbing, dying, gasping and fangirling too while I wrote this and for you to feel the same things while reading just means SO MUCH to me :)
@ilikecookies
Gerard flipping pancakes will definitely be a thing, it HAS to be! Haha! Honestly, most ideas just happen while I'm writing. So I'll probably just start and see what happens :)
THANK YOU ALL SO MUCH <3 (And yes, I will probably add more chapters...so PLEASE keep subscribed...)
@the_girl
Honestly, probably not. Your writing is so amazing that you somehow manage to make even the most boring everyday things sound new and exciting. And also, wasn't one of your ideas to go find Finn's 'bitch mother' and sort stuff out? If you thought it was boring, you could have someone from the past (or even Jen) come and mess it up a bit? But really, even if the sequel was ten chapters of Gerard flipping pancakes, I'd probably still read it! :)
HOLY MOTHER FUCKING FUCK. I don't even know where to begin without making this comment it's own story, but all I can say is this was a beautiful, beautiful story. It made me laugh, cry, sob, die, gasp, and just fangirl. I think the style that you wrote this in just fit perfectly with the characters and plot line you created, and not many people can do that as well as you did. This has to be my favorite story on this website, and I'm so glad you didn't just throw away the ending, you formed it within time and just pieced it together in such a perfectly executed manner. As for the sequel, all thoses ideas sound rad as fuck. Thank you for writing this and as always, I can't wait to read more :)
OHMYFUCK IM CRYING AND I LOVE IT AND YAY THEY HAD HOT MAKE UP SEX BUT IM CRYING SO I DON'T KNOW IF ITS A GOOD THING BECAUSE I CRIED WHEN THEY HAD SEX AND WHAT AM I FEELING I DON'T KNOW.
Its was 0202 when I saw the notification for this. I got up to go to the loo and checked my alerts on my ipod. I almost cried when I saw the freaking alert because I knew it would either kill me or make everything better (not sure which it's done, maybe they're the same thing) and I think that shows a lot about just how amazingly awesome and powerful I found this.
Thank you thank you thank you for writing this. It has shattered my heart then repeatedly stitched it and pulled the stitches out and started over. It may become my version of the bible. I've enjoyed reading this so much more than any other fanfiction and I believe it will always be that way.
Now fangirling aside.
Since I found it I've been talking about how they should basically have sex more among other things but I'm really glad you didn't put too much smut in now I think about it (although if a sequel was just sniffy and cuddly I wouldn't mind) and I think you have the perfect mix of everything in this- a great storyline, sexiness, good characters, sadness...
In summary: assdfghjklllkjhgdsadfhjjllkjhgddaadfhkll.
On the subject of a sequel: I don't think ill get bored of anything and all of those ideas sound great. Seriously I would read all of them even the weird still pregnant one.
cogratulations on reaching the end of my small essay. And one again, thank you so fucking much for writing the mot perfect thing I can remember reading. I think. I've never been this shattered by a book of fanfiction other than when dobby died.
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@Killjoy-partypoison
Thank you so much :) I actually love the road trip research, feels like I'm going on one myself
(that and the sexy times)
4/18/14