What If They Find Out - Comments

@Killjoyforlife
of course :)

@Killjoyforlife
I think it's pretty great. We always think it could be better. Nothing wrong w revising. Can't wait for the sequel. After Frank's grad sounds great. We all know what Gee can finally do to Frankie after graduation. ;)

@Hail of Bullets
Thanks for your opinion. And also, thank you for thinking about me too. It's always nice to see that someone cares about my thoughts. :)

@Sharpest_Life_B
Thank you for sharing that. I was thinking a lot of the same things when I wrote that about Bob. It's great to know that people are really getting something out of my story. And I know that it was pretty rushed. I am kind of disappointed with the story. But I would like to do better during the sequel. Which I was planning for after Frank graduates. :)

I'd like a sequel to this. I think this one may have ended just a bit ubruptly but I see how it's an end. I would like to see how they fair in the future. maybe after Frank is 18?

The thing u did w Bob w rly good I think. It was an accelerated way to show a lot of points. Besides the thoughts on suicide, I like that u showed that we don't know whats going on in the lives of others. Bullies are made not born just like any other kind of hatred that exists in this world. I come from a family background of violence and I can see clearly how it was learned behavior. And each generation thinks the previous is more cruel them themselves.

l think a sequel would be nice, especially if that is what you would like to do cx

@Killjoyforlife
Any time! :) I'm happy to help

@Soulless Vampire
Thank you so much. I tried really hard to add the emotion and stuff to it so it was special. And thanks again for the idea. It really helps. :)

God damn this was beautiful. I cried reading this chapter. Maybe have Gerard get a job elsewhere and he has to take it or something. I don't know.

@Killjoyforlife
Hehe~ thank you again.

@S-C-A-R-E-C-R-O-W
You are welcome. I didn't really know what I wanted to do with that chapter, but I knew I couldn't kill Frank. That would've killed me, and I guess many of you too. And thank you for the idea. I'll think about that one, or play with it a bit. Maybe I will use it. Maybe I'll find a way to make it better or different and use that. Who knows. :)

thank you!
thank you thank you thank you!

they could get caught.

NO!

No!!!

YAY

YAY

@EarlySunsetsOverMonroeville

Yep! :)

FRANK IS OKAY!

I just finished reading this and you need to update! You are playing with my feels! STAPH PLAYING WITH MY FEELS.
phulease updateeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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