The Way Home - Comments, page 4

Oh I'm so glad she broke through her fear, that was so lovely

Great! Wow, this is developing in such an amazing way.

Oh that was so romantic and then it all went to shit. Thier pasts just won't let go. :[

Oh, wow.

Oh wow I missed a bit because of visitors, bad weather and power out but this is wonderful. get all goosebumpy at the end of that chapter, soooo romantic and sexy

LOVE this story!

Hmm...what could she have planned?

AHHH, you're really keeping us in suspense for the surprise! I love how this is progressing, I'm really curious if he'll remember her if/when he returns to his body and what he'll do. The way I see it, this can either end sickeningly happy or sickeningly melancholy, and I'm not sure which I'd prefer. Keep it up!

Great chapter. Poor Frank. Can't wait till he kicks G's ass.

Caught up after messing a few chapters. Loving it! The pain of the others is so real and Gerard and Ayasha are both opening up. So good

N'aww, Tom's a sweetheart :3 and poor Ayasha. He can't forget her. Can he? :/

I love how you're getting into the conflicting emotions of the situation. This is so, so good!

Tom is awesome; I don't think he'd really care about her past. And he knows Kyle and his old man are trouble from the word go.

This is absolutley beautiful. Amazing writing, good pace, unique idea. I can't wait to see what happens next.

*sniffle*

Oh that's sad, poor Donna and Mikey. Finally gerard is seeing how he's hurt people. I hope together he and Ayasha can both heal

Really enjoying this story. I like when you switch back and forth between where Gerard's "spirit body" is and where his physical body is located, and how in his coma he can still hear the voices of those who love him.

Aww, this story is so emotional. I love it so much.

Lovely, poor Ayasha, such a sad memory

Happy New Year! Love the way the story is unfolding, he's finally understanding. So sad to heat mikey, Alicia ad Lindsey, Poor Bandit must be so confused