The Way Home - Comments, page 3

*choke!* Oh wow, I need to know what happens next!

this is making me crazy. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Ohmygod this story is amazing!!!!!!!!!!

NO!!!!!!

SCREAAAMMMMMM

No. You can't leave me there. Please, I'm begging, put another update up soon.

What is happening? God, this is so sad. :-(

oh poor Gee! What's happening ? This is getting scary

Wonderful, but I feel so worried for Gee, I'd just love to know everything goes happily ever after they are so good for each other.
His weakness with Ayasha makes me wonder if it's him going back to his body or that his link with his body getting weaker. Oh I can't wait for the next chapter!

Oh my god Caren, you don't just ask people why their white.

Wow, that was great. But what's happening when he feels weaker? Does it mean he's going back or not?

It's a bittersweet chapter given recent events, but that needn't change your story, it's the relationships between the characters that makes it so real, actual life doesn't have to be part of it.
I'm glad Tom sees Ayasha as more than her past, he sees her as the person she is, not what she was. I hope Kyle really gets his comeuppance, Tom is not one to be crossed!

Sounds like Tom knows more about Ayasha than just the bad things she's done in her past. This was a great chapter.

Oh what's happening to Gee? His weakness worries me a lot, he really has changed but any second chance is fading

Aw man, this is really starting to worry me. Too bad she didn't cut Kyle's throat...or something else.

OMG!!!! Kyle is an absolute bastard and what's happening to Gerard?

I knew Kyle was going to mess things up! Bastard!

I loved the legends she told him, so detailed and so helpful as well.

Oh that's just wonderful. I'm so glad they've opened up

I am so amazed at this story. Made me giggle a little that everyone in LA is so concerned about his heart when WE ALL KNOW what's been making it race.