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7

Snow


*A few months later.*

I sat patiently at the table in a small cafe on the edge of town. The huge bay window next to me was cool and snow fell gently down and created a blanket of white across the street which halted cars and buses. The sun was barely visible behind a sea of clouds but was still brighter than the dim lights hanging above me. I watched as people skidded on the ice and as kids hurled snowballs at each other's faces, deciding that at this particular moment in time that I would rather sit in the empty cafe with a warm cup of coffee.

A familiar figure walked into the room, crutches no longer by his side and no limp in his leg. It was of course JJ. His hair was longer than usual and the dark curls where reaching down to his shoulders. He smiled, waved and sat on the chair opposite me. After ordering a coffee he turned to me with his bright blue eyes.

"Hi." He smiled, taking his beanie from his head and placing onto the small wooden table.
"Hi." I replied, taking another sip from my coffee.
"Are you okay?"
"Yeah, I can walk now. I didn't realise it took so long to recover from being shot in the leg."
"Hm...." He smiled gently, "me neither...or in the chest."
"Jeez....I'm sorry I brought it all up again." I sighed.
"It's okay Mikes, I wanted to talk to you about it anyway." He tapped his foot nervously against the floor.
"Okay."
"Well, did you hear about it?"
"Um...no..."
"Vince has been found guilty: he's been given a life sentence for one case of attempted murder and another for possessing illegal firearms and weapons."
"Oh," I spluttered, "but what about his brother?"
"The same..." Vince smiled, "but with a speeding ticket."
"Haha." I laughed weakly, "what are you going to do now?"
"That's what I wanted to talk to you about, Mikes."
"Okay...please continue....." I replied sarcastically.

"Okay so...you know how I said that Vince had killed my entire family?"
I nodded.
"I was wrong."
"Wait, what?! How?"
"Well..." JJ began as a smile etched its way into his face, "well I have a sister. I didn't know about her. She was adopted before I was born because my parents lost their house and didn't have enough money to keep her safe. But she also...she also lives with my brother who managed to get away. He's been hiding ever since he escaped from Vince."
"Woah! JJ that's great! How did you find out about them?"
"Vince." He spat the word out, "before they took him away he told me and apologised. At first I thought that he was lying but after a few weeks I managed to find her and then she told me about my brother."
"Are you going to visit them?" I asked.
"Yeah, in two days." He smiled, nodding his head vigorously.
"Dude! I'm so happy for you."
"Thanks."
"When will you get back?"
"Um..." JJ mumbled, avoiding eye contact as he messed with his lip ring, "um...I don't know Mikes. I'm going to live with them."
"Oh...okay..." I replied, words getting caught in my throat, "where do they live?"
"Australia."
"Oh."
"Listen I'm sorry Mikey! I will visit! I promise!" He cried, "I just don't want to stay here, I want to be with my family."
"It's okay..." I looked up from my feet and forced a smile, "I understand, you should be happy."

"You know what Mikes?" JJ said after a short silence, "you're the best friend that I've ever had."
"Oh"
"I've not had many friends..." He laughed, "but you're definitely the best of them."
"Thanks JJ, and despite everything you too. When is your flight?"
"Flight?" He asked, tilting his head to one side slightly.
"Well I presume that you're flying to Australia, not travelling by horse or walking."
"Oh shit yeah." He laughed, "my flight is in 2 days time at 11:05."
"Okay good. I'm coming to wave goodbye."
"But Mikes. Are you going to be okay? You know, in the airport? After what happened last time?"
"I'll have to be..."

We talked for another few hours in that small cafe until the owners were kicking us out onto the frozen streets. There we said our goodbyes, I limped away slightly as I held back tears. I didn't want JJ to leave, but at least I could say goodbye before I probably was never going to see him again.

Notes

Hello again with the almost final instalment of this fanfic! Ah, I hope this chapter was okay and I hope that the next chapter will bring this story to a good ending. I started uploading my other new story today, it's called the colours of humans so if you wanna check some weird ass story narrated by Death then that's it. Thank you so much for reading and for all the support given, I probably would have abandoned this story if it wasnt for the votes and comments so thank you very much. :) enjoy your day.
-Lou

Comments

@SaskiaK
Aw, thank you so much.

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Yeah, I think that comments (whether they are positive/have constructive criticism) are inspiring and they can really motivate you to write and keep a story going.

Thank you very much and I'm really glad that you enjoyed. :) x

@SaskiaK
Aw, thank you so much.

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Yeah, I think that comments (whether they are positive/have constructive criticism) are inspiring and they can really motivate you to write and keep a story going.

Thank you you very and I'm really glad that you enjoyed. :) x

What a wonderful ending! It was really sweet and funny too. I really enjoyed this story - weird and wonderful! :D
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You're right about losing heart when no one makes a comment. I don't think people understand how inspiring it can be to an author to receive comments. I've been getting some lovely comments from someone on The Collector and I think I've written 3 chapters in a week! :P

Anyway fab story! You're a very talented author!
Sas xx

SaskiaK SaskiaK
8/19/17

@SaskiaK

Yep, I agree. I think that sometimes when you write you kinda go through good patches and bad when writing. My mind had been kinda blank the last few weeks and I've read back through a few chapters before I posted them and been like, is this even good enough? And felt like giving up, but knowing that someone actually reads and doesn't hate it almost makes you want to carry on writing, which I suppose is a good thing. :)

and hopefully this story should come to a gentle end with both of them being safe and happy, but I can't bring myself to say that they will never see each other again.

Thank you so much for everything. And I do hope that the ending will be good. :) x

Your note pretty much said it all. I don't think people realise how important comments are. They can be really inspiring. Everything from "I enjoyed that chapter" to comments on the action and emotions as if it were really happening make an author want to continue. Yes, we write for our own amusement, but if we didn't want to see what others thought or merely to entertain, we wouldn't post them. They do make such a difference.

And on that note, the actual comment! :)
A nice gentle chapter so we can get our breath back from all the heart-in-mouth action! I'm happy for JJ and Mikey, they both have family and they know Vince and his brother are both locked up for good. Nobody seems to be going after Mikey for the other murders he didn't even know about so it all looks good. Except they're going to be on opposite sides of the world. After everything they've been through, it's heartbreaking! I hope everything works out for them, it seems only fair after what they've both suffered.

Great chapter!! Will be sad to see it end, but I'm sure it'll be a great ending.
Sas xx

SaskiaK SaskiaK
8/18/17