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7

'Safety'


Hills rolled into view as JJ headed towards the motorway, putting the car into 6th gear and heading for the inside lane. Green grass turned to grey tarmac, trees disappeared and tensions rose. He gripped the steering wheel tightly and turned the stereo on. It failed to work the first time but after being hit several times by JJ's angry fist it worked and A song for the dead by Queens of the stone age blasted through the speakers.
'At least the serial killer had a good music taste.' I contemplated on saying this out loud but decided against it when I saw the frown that clung to JJ's face.
I looked down to my stomach where a small trickle of blood was making its way down my shirt.

"JJ, I'm bleeding." I mumbled weakly.
"Don't worry Mikes, it's barely a scratch. I'm sure you'll be fine."
"Why did you do that?"
"Do what?" JJ muttered, turning the music down slightly and adjusting his lip ring.
"Why did you stop Vince from killing me?"
"Remember task 7, when I wanted you to kill me. I wanted to die because I had no friends o-"
"But I was your friend…" I butted in defensively.
"I know, but I had lost all my family. I was alone and wanted to see them. I wanted to see my parents and I wanted to never be alone again in this world again. Grief is a strange think, Mikes. People react in many different ways. Some people cry, some sit for months and don't say a word and like me some wish to join their families because the world is strange and new without someone by your side. But that night you were my friend. You stopped me from making possibly the stupidest decision of my life. If you had killed me that night then you probably wouldn't be alive now. Humans are strange Mikey. You refused to kill me because you are my friend."
"Yeah," I replied, confusion still running a marathon through my voice, "But I don't see how tha-"
"Don't you see Mikey?!"
I shook my head.
"It's exactly the same but reversed! This time your family had been taken away from you and you wanted to die, but I, being your friend couldn't let that happen to you. I couldn't watch you die.

"Oh," I choked on my own words as they tumbled out of my mouth, "um, thanks. Where are we going?"
"To the airport." JJ replied, "we're getting on a plane and getting away from here, Vince will probably be after us and I have to keep you safe. I'm so sorry about your parents and brother Mikes but we have to go. One day we might be able to return but at the moment it is not safe."
"A plane to where?" I asked.
"Not sure just yet Mikey. We'll decide when we get there."
"But what about my passport?"
"I've got it Mikes."
"But how did yo-"
"Well what else did you think I'd be doing while you were completing all, um, sorry, m-most of the tasks?"
"So you knew this was going to happen all along?" I asked angrily.
"No, this was just in case, I had no way of predicting that this would happen but you know: you should always take precautions."
I leant my head back against the seat and sighed loudly.


"So, we are going to Spain?" I asked as JJ booked the flights.
"Sí. Vamos a ir Espana!"
"JJ, what the hell are you saying?"
"Better practise your Spanish Mikey. We'll be living la vida loca!"
"You can speak Spanish?" I asked, tilting my head to one side.
"Un poco. Debieras aprender Español."
"JJ! What the hell are you saying?!"
"¡Vámonos!" He yelled, running away from me.
"JJ!"
"Let's go!"

JJ ran forwards through the crystal white building, almost colliding with others and their heaving suitcases several times with me trying to catch up to him.

JJ was quite far in front of me when I saw the bullet break through the glass

He dropped to the floor

A scream

Blood streaming across the floor

JJ, a heap on the floor in front

Another bullet

I fell to the floor

A screaming crowd surrounding

Vince being tackled to the floor

Sirens

The strain of a defibrillator

Rushed paramedics

Blood leaking from my body

Tears rolling onto the floor

One last glance at my motionless friend

And then…

Nothing.

Notes

Hello again! I'm so sorry for the cliffhangers.
But woah! Guys...I noticed how many views this had this morning and thank you all so much.
Sorry updates have been slow, I came back to writing this today and accidentally started writing in 3rd person. *mentally facepalms*
But anywho, I hope this was okay (and sorry if the Spanish wasn't perfect)
Hope to see you again soon. :)
-LOu

Comments

@SaskiaK
Aw, thank you so much.

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Yeah, I think that comments (whether they are positive/have constructive criticism) are inspiring and they can really motivate you to write and keep a story going.

Thank you very much and I'm really glad that you enjoyed. :) x

@SaskiaK
Aw, thank you so much.

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Yeah, I think that comments (whether they are positive/have constructive criticism) are inspiring and they can really motivate you to write and keep a story going.

Thank you you very and I'm really glad that you enjoyed. :) x

What a wonderful ending! It was really sweet and funny too. I really enjoyed this story - weird and wonderful! :D
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You're right about losing heart when no one makes a comment. I don't think people understand how inspiring it can be to an author to receive comments. I've been getting some lovely comments from someone on The Collector and I think I've written 3 chapters in a week! :P

Anyway fab story! You're a very talented author!
Sas xx

SaskiaK SaskiaK
8/19/17

@SaskiaK

Yep, I agree. I think that sometimes when you write you kinda go through good patches and bad when writing. My mind had been kinda blank the last few weeks and I've read back through a few chapters before I posted them and been like, is this even good enough? And felt like giving up, but knowing that someone actually reads and doesn't hate it almost makes you want to carry on writing, which I suppose is a good thing. :)

and hopefully this story should come to a gentle end with both of them being safe and happy, but I can't bring myself to say that they will never see each other again.

Thank you so much for everything. And I do hope that the ending will be good. :) x

Your note pretty much said it all. I don't think people realise how important comments are. They can be really inspiring. Everything from "I enjoyed that chapter" to comments on the action and emotions as if it were really happening make an author want to continue. Yes, we write for our own amusement, but if we didn't want to see what others thought or merely to entertain, we wouldn't post them. They do make such a difference.

And on that note, the actual comment! :)
A nice gentle chapter so we can get our breath back from all the heart-in-mouth action! I'm happy for JJ and Mikey, they both have family and they know Vince and his brother are both locked up for good. Nobody seems to be going after Mikey for the other murders he didn't even know about so it all looks good. Except they're going to be on opposite sides of the world. After everything they've been through, it's heartbreaking! I hope everything works out for them, it seems only fair after what they've both suffered.

Great chapter!! Will be sad to see it end, but I'm sure it'll be a great ending.
Sas xx

SaskiaK SaskiaK
8/18/17