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I don't think I'm capable of killing. psychopaths are the killers, not us.
"Frank, I think I know why you beat me up." is this normal.
"Oh yeah, why's that."
"Because you think I'm gay!" child.
"No."
"Depressed?" obnoxious.
"No."
"Boring?" whiny.
"No."
"Well then why?" beggar.
"Gerard, you're weak, and because of that people like me will always bother you, got it."
"Yeah...so you're trying to toughen me up?" he said sounding hopeful.
"No, I want to break you." hey I think I made a breakthrough, if only my dad were here to see this.
"Frank?"
"Yeah..."
"I am gay."
"Good for you now kick rocks."
"What?"
"Beat it, leave, scram, shoo! You're a nuisance, i can't stand being around you." Gerard walked away, mumbling to himself.

Notes

Alight, short dialogue. Enjoy it, leave your thoughts, and as always...take care my lovelies(^-^)

Comments

@JesusofBaltimore
Thanks so much, I was trying to achieve the "diary" feel, without it actually being a diary. I really appreciate how thoroughly you explained what you liked about my story. Twas very constructive and reassuring.

Lollita:3 Lollita:3
1/10/16

I actually really like the way this has been written! I like the impersonal-ness of frank that really does capture the nature of a sociopath (Which, I may add, you're doing great at). I love the really short chapters... makes it seem more like a running commentary or diary sort of thing! I can't wait to read more!

@AnonymousNarwhal
Thank-you for your honesty, but I would like some clarification please.

Lollita:3 Lollita:3
11/8/15

Too fast... This is umm okay. Sorry. I find it interesting that Frank is a sociopath but the way the story is made is eehh. Sorry.

Thanks I appreciate it

Lollita:3 Lollita:3
9/2/15