
Numb
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I don't think I'm capable of killing. psychopaths are the killers, not us.
"Frank, I think I know why you beat me up." is this normal.
"Oh yeah, why's that."
"Because you think I'm gay!" child.
"No."
"Depressed?" obnoxious.
"No."
"Boring?" whiny.
"No."
"Well then why?" beggar.
"Gerard, you're weak, and because of that people like me will always bother you, got it."
"Yeah...so you're trying to toughen me up?" he said sounding hopeful.
"No, I want to break you." hey I think I made a breakthrough, if only my dad were here to see this.
"Frank?"
"Yeah..."
"I am gay."
"Good for you now kick rocks."
"What?"
"Beat it, leave, scram, shoo! You're a nuisance, i can't stand being around you." Gerard walked away, mumbling to himself.
Notes
Alight, short dialogue. Enjoy it, leave your thoughts, and as always...take care my lovelies(^-^)
@JesusofBaltimore
Thanks so much, I was trying to achieve the "diary" feel, without it actually being a diary. I really appreciate how thoroughly you explained what you liked about my story. Twas very constructive and reassuring.
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