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School, most people hate it, I however find it to be the highlight of my day. You'll see why quite shortly.
----time lapse----
This is so boring! I get it a lot of people die during war! Stupid history. I know I said school was the highlight of my day, but I didn't mean the learning part. God no. I meant the passing periods, lunch, right when it ends. Like right now, it's lunch time and someone just made eye contact with me. Everyone knows that I will beat anyone who makes eye contact with me, so why did this guy do it? Let's go find out.

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@JesusofBaltimore
Thanks so much, I was trying to achieve the "diary" feel, without it actually being a diary. I really appreciate how thoroughly you explained what you liked about my story. Twas very constructive and reassuring.

Lollita:3 Lollita:3
1/10/16

I actually really like the way this has been written! I like the impersonal-ness of frank that really does capture the nature of a sociopath (Which, I may add, you're doing great at). I love the really short chapters... makes it seem more like a running commentary or diary sort of thing! I can't wait to read more!

@AnonymousNarwhal
Thank-you for your honesty, but I would like some clarification please.

Lollita:3 Lollita:3
11/8/15

Too fast... This is umm okay. Sorry. I find it interesting that Frank is a sociopath but the way the story is made is eehh. Sorry.

Thanks I appreciate it

Lollita:3 Lollita:3
9/2/15