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Love-nap

Authors note

Hey guys, people still subscribed to this story!
I am thinking of rewriting this story seeing as I am older now with more writing experience.
This has been my most successful fanfiction and I think I could write it again but better and more maturely this time! So stay tuned!
I have been reading through the comments and I understand what you mean exactly haha, the story was a bit surreal and cutesy. I'll still try and keep the cutesy vibe in it though, but with darker undertones as the event taking place is not something that happens casually.
I am willing to explore the consequences of Gerard's actions more and make the whole thing a slower process! With more character and story development.
I have a lot of free time as I am on study leave at the moment so I've been writing quite a bit on here :)
Thanks for reading, stay tuned!

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My_Frerard_Fanfics My_Frerard_Fanfics
5/17/17

@My name is JeanValJean
PRISIONER 24601 YOUR TIME IS UP AND YOUR PAROL'S BEGUN. YOU KNOW WHAT THAT MEANS.
yeah. I thought that too. Great idea. Too quickly executed

BLOOD'Y REVENGE BLOOD'Y REVENGE
3/1/15

This is a rather interesting concept, but I find the grammar, or lack thereof, distracting, and the characters seem unnatural in their actions, especially in the way Frank accepts his situation and warms up to Gerard alarmingly quickly with no character development in between or explanation further than Gerard not hurting him. Frank also seems to act like it a casual thing to occur rather than an extreme event. I praise you for the concept but I feel the execution is failing you.

JeanValJean JeanValJean
2/26/15

@Gee'sCLUELESSgirl!
Oh I haven't mentioned it but I was going to make them about 15-16, they are kind of young for 16 I guess but yeh but I liked the cuteness going on lol. I think they're relationship might get more mature when Gee's ankle is better, I'm probably gonna write a sequel! xx

My_Frerard_Fanfics My_Frerard_Fanfics
2/26/15



My_Frerard_Fanfics My_Frerard_Fanfics
2/26/15
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