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Love-nap

Doorstep

"So baby, school tomorrow? We really gotta catch up on the work we missed." I ask Gerard,
"Yeh, but I start boarding school next Monday, please make sure to come too!"
"Next Monday! So soon??"
"Yeh" Gerard sighs.
"I better sort this out with my parents.. Anywho, see you tomorrow." I plant a kiss on his forehead and stand up from the doorstep.
"Bye Frank. I love you."
I turn around, "I love you too."




*TIME LAPSE*


It's Friday, the last day of this school, soon Gerard and I will be going to boarding school together. I'm scared to be honest but atleast I can be with him all he time, I hope we get to share a room.
I hold his hand down the hallway, checking out all the shocked faces as we do so, some girl even faints when I make out with him by his locker.
Gee's ankle is a lot better now, though I'm starting to think he exaggerated it a bit just so I would carry him around everywhere, oh well. I don't mind.
"So. Last day here" Gee smiles.
"Yeh, let's make the most of it. But boarding school won't be too bad... If a share a room" I wink at him. He giggles.
"What do you mean by that hehe" he says going tomato red.
"Oh, you know" I grin. Gee tickles my ear and kisses me again infront of a load of cheerleaders.
*BELL RINGS*
"Oh time for maths" I groan.
"Yeh, let's go." Gee grabs my hand and we walk there.

Notes

Sorry for short chapter, I've been really busy with school today :I

Comments

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@My name is JeanValJean
PRISIONER 24601 YOUR TIME IS UP AND YOUR PAROL'S BEGUN. YOU KNOW WHAT THAT MEANS.
yeah. I thought that too. Great idea. Too quickly executed

This is a rather interesting concept, but I find the grammar, or lack thereof, distracting, and the characters seem unnatural in their actions, especially in the way Frank accepts his situation and warms up to Gerard alarmingly quickly with no character development in between or explanation further than Gerard not hurting him. Frank also seems to act like it a casual thing to occur rather than an extreme event. I praise you for the concept but I feel the execution is failing you.

JeanValJean JeanValJean
2/26/15

@Gee'sCLUELESSgirl!
Oh I haven't mentioned it but I was going to make them about 15-16, they are kind of young for 16 I guess but yeh but I liked the cuteness going on lol. I think they're relationship might get more mature when Gee's ankle is better, I'm probably gonna write a sequel! xx