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Love-nap

NOT GUILTY and petnames

After the meeting with the police Gerard and I are told to wait outside while our parents talk to the policemen. Gerard keeps on trying to listen at the door but the room is soundproof, I keep telling him that but he won't listen.
"Gerard it's soundproof listen to me!"
"OKAY FINE!" he says crawling away from the door and slumping against the police lockers.
I sit next to him and put my arm around him. "You'll be fine Gee. You won't be guilty trust me"
"You think?"
"I know." I kiss him gently just as our parents and the police walk out the room, I spring back from Gerard trying to act natural and like we weren't just kissing.
"Gerard." The police man says with a bunch of "CONFIDENTIAL" papers in his hands, "You are not guilty."
"YAYYYYY!" Gerard screams hugging me, we both sway side to side with each other happily as we cuddle.
"Hey to apologize for all of this, would you all like to have for dinner at our house tonight?" Gerard Mum suggests.
"Of course we'd love too!" My Mum replies.
"Okay great. Be there around 8." Gerard Mum exclaims.




*TIME LAPSE*

I'm sat with Gerard watching a movie, while our parents are chatting downstairs.
"I still have to go to boarding school Frankie." Gee says sadly,
"It's okay I'm coming with you."
Gerard looks down and fiddles with his fingers, "Ah, well I don't really think you should" he mumbles.
"What?? Why??!" I say tearing up a bit.
"Well it's just that, what if we get bullied for being gay."
"Gerard I don't give a shit. As long as I have you I'm fine. Bullies can bully me all they want, but they can never take my happiness which is you."
"Yeh. I guess but."
"But? Gerard do you wanna break up with or something?"
"No NOO!!"
"Well, I don't want to be in a relationship were you're embarrassed to be with me." I say walking out the room. I run to the bathroom and let out the tears.
Gerard knocks on the door, "Frank I'm sorry!!!" he bangs loudly on the door. "I love you and I'm not embarrassed to be with you! Frank I'm sorry!!!"
"Well if you're not embarrassed then you'd wouldn't care what others think would you?"
"I'm sorry! Bullies scare me, but I will ignore them. I realize now all I need is you and screw the bullies. Please come out and come to boarding school with me!" Gerard says as he starts to cry. He pounds his fists on the door, I unlock the door and open it, Gerard accidently punches me in the balls. "OWWWW GERARDDD!!!" I scream clutching my crotch, wincing and whining.
"Sorrry Frankie" He cries, putting his head on his knees as he cries into them. I kneel down next to him realizes of fragile he is. "I'll look after you Geebear" I say rubbing his hair and putting my arm around him.
"Thankyou Frank. Hehe"
"No problem Gee-bee"
"No problem Frank-wank"
"Frank-wank....."
"Yehhahhh" He laughs
"GERARD, FRANK, DINNER'S READY" his Mum calls.
"Oh yay!!! Foood!!!!" Gerard yells, putting his arms in the air signalling me to pick him up, I lift him up and carry him downstairs to the dining room.

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Comments

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@My name is JeanValJean
PRISIONER 24601 YOUR TIME IS UP AND YOUR PAROL'S BEGUN. YOU KNOW WHAT THAT MEANS.
yeah. I thought that too. Great idea. Too quickly executed

This is a rather interesting concept, but I find the grammar, or lack thereof, distracting, and the characters seem unnatural in their actions, especially in the way Frank accepts his situation and warms up to Gerard alarmingly quickly with no character development in between or explanation further than Gerard not hurting him. Frank also seems to act like it a casual thing to occur rather than an extreme event. I praise you for the concept but I feel the execution is failing you.

JeanValJean JeanValJean
2/26/15

@Gee'sCLUELESSgirl!
Oh I haven't mentioned it but I was going to make them about 15-16, they are kind of young for 16 I guess but yeh but I liked the cuteness going on lol. I think they're relationship might get more mature when Gee's ankle is better, I'm probably gonna write a sequel! xx