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Love-nap

Look alive sunshine

I wake up to Gerard snoring loudly in my ear. His cute chubby hands are still clutched to my pyjama shirt. I smile and watch him as he sleeps, and kiss his forehead as I just couldn't resist!
Soon Gerard opens his heavy sleepy eyes and instantly lights up when he sees my face, "Morning Frankie!!" He yells excitedly, he looks around the room disorientated, probably forgetting how he got here.
"Morning Gee-bear!" I say stroking his rosy morning cheek. He nuzzles his nose into my chest and closes his eyes again.
"So, Gee shouldn't we be going back to school today?"
"Awh, Frank! Really?" he moans
"Well I suppose we can have the day off, but hey wait don't you have to go and see the police?"
"Oh.. Yeh" He grumbles, his eyes starting to tear up a bit.
"It's okay, don't cry sweetie, I'll come too and explain it's not as bad as it seems!"
"Oh, okay. But you don't have to, it was my fault!" Gee says sitting up and getting out of bed.
"Gee!! You're ankl-" Gee falls over with a huge thud when he tries to stand up, forgetting about his ankle and falls flat on his face. "Oww!" Gerard cries, with tears falling down his carpet burnt cheeks.
"Gee!" I say trying not to laugh, I go over to him and stoke his messy hair, "Gerard, oh sweetie!" I pull his crying face into my chest so he can't see me laughing.
"Fr-frank, are you laughing at me?" He says looking up at me with tearful puppy dog eyes.
"No, no Gerard- Okay maybe a bit but you are so clumsy and.."
"But Frank I'm hurt! You're laughing at my pain!!" he says bringing his hands up doing a puzzled gesture with them, "Don't you care!"
"Gee of course I do! I'm sorry I didn't mean to!"
Gerard slaps my face with his floppy, clumsy hand.
"Oww!" I yell
"Okay, you're forgiven now" he says smiling and trying to get up again.
"Gee!" I drag him down onto my lap and cradle him like a baby, "Are you forgetting again??"
"Ohh yes!" he giggles, "so before we go to the police can we have some breakfast, I'm starving!!" Gee points out.
"Sure, sure" I scoop him up and carry him downstairs to the kitchen.
"Okay, do you want brownies? We have brownies! And orange juice."
"Yes please!!" Gee says tapping his hands on the table in anticipation. "Can you feed me it? My ankle hurts?"
"Gee you are getting so lazy ahaha, but sure. Although it's slightly embarrassing how I'm now going out with a toddler!" I say sitting down and putting the food on the table.
"Shut up and feed me!" he says crossing his arms like and irritable 2 year old, I lift Gee up of his chair and sit him on my lap
"Okay then, open wide for the aeroplane baby" I laugh, he giggles. I feed him the brownies, when my Mum walks in it's awkward.
"Who is this? Is this Gerard?" She asks awkwardly, probably trying to get the image out of her head of me feeding Gerard brownies whilst he's sat on my lap.
"Yes this is Gerard.."
Gerard is still sat on my lap chewing the soft brownies.
"The one who kidnapped you?" Mum asks.
"Yehh, which reminds me I have to go to the police with Gerard today, can you take me?"
"Police!! Umm okay, but I'm coming too!"
"Okay Mum."
"You two get dressed and we'll go."
"Okay, let's get dressed then, Gerard you can wear some of my clothes" I say picking him up and carrying to my room. Mum tries to ignore the fact I'm carrying Gerard around everywhere like he's a puppy. Gerard and I get ready in my room.

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@My name is JeanValJean
PRISIONER 24601 YOUR TIME IS UP AND YOUR PAROL'S BEGUN. YOU KNOW WHAT THAT MEANS.
yeah. I thought that too. Great idea. Too quickly executed

This is a rather interesting concept, but I find the grammar, or lack thereof, distracting, and the characters seem unnatural in their actions, especially in the way Frank accepts his situation and warms up to Gerard alarmingly quickly with no character development in between or explanation further than Gerard not hurting him. Frank also seems to act like it a casual thing to occur rather than an extreme event. I praise you for the concept but I feel the execution is failing you.

JeanValJean JeanValJean
2/26/15

@Gee'sCLUELESSgirl!
Oh I haven't mentioned it but I was going to make them about 15-16, they are kind of young for 16 I guess but yeh but I liked the cuteness going on lol. I think they're relationship might get more mature when Gee's ankle is better, I'm probably gonna write a sequel! xx