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When Frank is kidnapped, he is kept in Gerard's basement and visited everyday by the insane Gerard. Little does he know Gerard is madly inlove with him.
The most failed kinnap in history
2 years later..
@My name is JeanValJean
PRISIONER 24601 YOUR TIME IS UP AND YOUR PAROL'S BEGUN. YOU KNOW WHAT THAT MEANS.
yeah. I thought that too. Great idea. Too quickly executed
This is a rather interesting concept, but I find the grammar, or lack thereof, distracting, and the characters seem unnatural in their actions, especially in the way Frank accepts his situation and warms up to Gerard alarmingly quickly with no character development in between or explanation further than Gerard not hurting him. Frank also seems to act like it a casual thing to occur rather than an extreme event. I praise you for the concept but I feel the execution is failing you.
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5/17/17