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the black parade

look alive sunshine

Crystal

as i got off the bus i was hit by the sun, its warm tingly feeling creeping up my back, it felt good after being in a cold bus. too bad it’ll be gone soon i thought. If you look in the mirror and don't like what you see You can find out firsthand what it's like to be me. i was glad when my aunt gave me the money to buy the cd i had all three cd and it was i was listening to their newest one, welcome to the black parade

I walked past the store smiling at the dude behind the counter. I moved with my aunt after my mom died its been 7 years I guess. I looked up from my thoughts to see a boy standing on the sidewalk waving a little. "Who the fuck?" I looked back to see if there was anyone behind me. No One was but why was this boy waving at her? I waved at him awkwardly confused. “hi i'm alex just moved in.” I just looked at him taking in everything about him, his brownish gold eyes and his hair it was jet black and it really shined in the sunlight.”oh um...i’m Crystal um i live over there” i said pointing to the blue house across the street. he just stared at her awkwardly. i was about to leave when he put his hand up towards me, had a coke. I looked at it for a while and took it. “its a nice day and i had an extra one.” somehow we said we would hang out on Saturday. i was happy i as i walked home. happy...something i didn't now for sometime.

Alex

we talked for a bit somehow we decided to meet up tomorrow. i got up to my room and started to look for my bed sheet in the process i found my radio. i put in my C.D made my bed and laid down.

~time lapse~

“ALEX”

i opened my eyes, just laying there on my bed.

“ALEX DINNER” i jolted up, looking for my shoes

“COMING” as i walked out of my room i looked out the window i could see crystals house and into someones room. i walked down stairs thinking about her eyes. there were so pretty, brownish black eyes. it was like they were asking him for help.

"Hey what you smiling about?" I looked at my mom a smile creeping up.

"What...oh nothing! Why?" Good now I wasn't going to hear the end of this.

"Haha sure son. By the way who was that girl you were talking to?"

"Huh oh that was crystal..." He trailed off thinking about her eyes again, he was more concerned about it now more than ever.

"Steve look look at ur son! U can tell he's in love" Alex blushed red

"NO"! It's not like that!"

“Calm down son your mother is just teasing you now come on lets eat befor it gets cold“

Comments

@KilljoyStarLight
Thanks! I'll be looking for the edited version of this soon. I really love it so far!
JackofTrades JackofTrades
5/30/13
@JackofTrades
im rewting it all so im hoping to let out a new virsion of this soon
btw i like ur story
The end of the first chapter was very hard to understand. I can't tell if it's a good or bad thing that she's lonely. (Please don't take this the wrong way. I'm not trying to be rude. I'm just trying to help.)
JackofTrades JackofTrades
5/29/13
Don't give up on it yet. I'm about to start reading. I haven't seen it before now. Just give me a little bit of time.
JackofTrades JackofTrades
5/29/13
@KilljoyStarLight

good luck and if you get a chance couls you check out my stories? Luv to know what you think
Fun Ghoul Fun Ghoul
5/28/13