the black parade - Comments

@KilljoyStarLight
Thanks! I'll be looking for the edited version of this soon. I really love it so far!

@JackofTrades
im rewting it all so im hoping to let out a new virsion of this soon
btw i like ur story

The end of the first chapter was very hard to understand. I can't tell if it's a good or bad thing that she's lonely. (Please don't take this the wrong way. I'm not trying to be rude. I'm just trying to help.)

Don't give up on it yet. I'm about to start reading. I haven't seen it before now. Just give me a little bit of time.

@KilljoyStarLight

good luck and if you get a chance couls you check out my stories? Luv to know what you think

@Fun Ghoul
thanks i just reread it all and yeah ur right. im a rewright it

it was interesting mayybe you should try re-writing it. Change up the plot a little or something. I like the crystal and alex characters. this story has potential