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The Ghost of You

Two

"Cheer up, Mikes. It's only a few months, a year tops." Bob sighed, clapping my shoulder. I peeled my eyes away from a copy of my wedding photo and sighed in response.
"Yeah, I guess you're right."
"You'll be home in no time, okay?"

Basic training was a blur. I couldn't really remember anything they taught us. I guess we were in such rush to get done with it that the instructor didn't seem to give two shits anyways. I looked over at my brother and smiled slightly as he looked back over at me, winking. I looked back down at the pictures I held in my hands and sighed, missing my family: The first one, probably one of my favorites of my sons, was at the hospital the day Alexander was born. 8 pounds, 7 ounces, and gorgeous head hair. Veronica and I were married a little over a 11 months when he was born and we were completely terrified. Well, she was, I guess. I was so intrigued by everything he did that I didn't seem to worry as much as my wife had. The second one was of me and Jamison at the beach in Los Angeles. This was taken a few weeks ago, after his birthday, and he was all smiles.

I can't believe how much I miss them already. It's only been 2 months but I just can't wait to get back home to my family and never let go of them.

My thoughts were interrupted by the sound of the drill sergeant coming in to make his rounds and bid us a good night. I finally rolled over in my bunk and listened to the sounds of Ray strumming his guitar and Frank chiming in somewhere along the lines. Soon, my brother had started to sing as Bob and I snapped our fingers to the beat of another sad song.

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Comments

@Shotgun Spirit

You're really doing great with your realism. Thanks to your mum for her service! My brother isn't stationed anywhere at the moment, but he's a Marine and will most likely be doing some embassy guarding.

@Killjosmakesomenoise


haha, thank you. We plan to.

Shotgun Spirit Shotgun Spirit
7/11/14

@HerGraceKilljoyRainbow


oh my gosh, thank you so much. We're trying to keep it as real as humanly possible and since my mom is an active duty soldier, I have a little experience with the trauma and worry of war.

Shotgun Spirit Shotgun Spirit
7/11/14

Ugh, did my comment not post? I'm going to say it again, just in case: this is nothing short of remarkable. Due to the fact that I have a personal connection, I love a good war story, and you've done something here that literally almost no one does with this sort of thing. It's not just a romance; within but a chapter you've captured the reality of it.

It's great plz continue